Why do I come to pare to study english?
English is internasional language. Because of globalisation era, now english become important thing for people in this world especially Indonesian to understand it. We have to expert in english to get a good job, scholarship in education, or to study aboard. Indonesia has english village, it name is pare. Many people include me come to pare to learn english. I come to pare because of three reason. That’s because of I think pare is a good place to study english, my english is too bad, and I want to be good in english.
Firstly, as english village, pare has many english course or english homestay there. They are almost 300, and most of them have own method and specification to teach english. For example, they are Kresna who specific on grammar, Oxford who specific on speaking, Dafodil who specific on speaking and writing, Test and Coupis who specific on Toefl and Ielts and many others. On the other hand, they have one purpose to make their student good in english. Because of that people who want to learn english in pare can choose where they can study in english. So i think Pare is the best place to study english focusly.
Secondly, I go to pare because I have my english very dreadful. I just have a few of vocabulary. When I speak or writing in english, I always think too long what word’s that I have to used. My less of vocabulary make my writing terrible. I think it is because of I am weak in stucture too. Beside that, I also has a problem in my listening and my speaking. From all of my bad thing i english I decide to come to pare to study english.
The last reason why I choose pare to study english is because I want to be expert in english. I think english is important to my career, I want to continu my study, and I want to get better job. I believe that if my english become better than now, my chance to catch them will be bigger.
So, I think pare I the most top place to me to study english. I hope I will understand english well and I can reach my dream.
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Sentence: That's because of I think pare is a good place to study english, my english is too bad, and I want to be good in english.
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Sentence: Because of that people who want to learn english in pare can choose where they can study in english.
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Sentence: My less of vocabulary make my writing terrible.
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Sentence: I think it is because of I am weak in stucture too.
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Sentence: So, I think pare I the most top place to me to study english.
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Sentence: I hope I will understand english well and I can reach my dream.
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Sentence: English is internasional language.
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Sentence: Because of globalisation era, now english become important thing for people in this world especially Indonesian to understand it.
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Sentence: Firstly, as english village, pare has many english course or english homestay there.
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Sentence: So i think Pare is the best place to study english focusly.
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Sentence: I think it is because of I am weak in stucture too.
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Sentence: I think english is important to my career, I want to continu my study, and I want to get better job.
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No. of Different Words: 154 200
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Score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 11 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 6 2
No. of Sentences: 25 15
No. of Words: 374 350
No. of Characters: 1566 1500
No. of Different Words: 154 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.398 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.187 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.366 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 106 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 77 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 28 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 15 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
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Sentence Length SD: 6.213 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.48 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.429 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.566 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.219 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5