What are the pros and cons for children of watching television?
These days people spend their space time watching TV.And also TV can attract children's attention.However,there are more benefits and drawbacks to discuss about TV.Below I am going to say to focus on your attention Tv has both pros and cons sides to young people.
I will start by looking at advantages of television.In this busy life television can be the easiest source of entertainment.
Children also can have a relax by watching cartoons and comedy shows after their courses or lessons.By watching news channel we get updated with the things going around the word.
Especially young people are more interested in new things than adults.
In addition to channels,like Discovery,Animal World gives information about Wild life.Kids are able to understand easily how our world has been changing.Watching quiz shows can increase their knowledge.When they watch channels which are performed quiz question,children will try to find the answer by using their mind.
On the other hand Tv shows adult scenes will have bad effect on children's mind.If they watch that scenes they will try to do it.And also a wrestling competitions show WWE has shown very much violence to people especially children who are still immature.
Another problem is that children who are addicted to watch television instead of playing outdoor games.They find it difficult to mix with other children.They donot make friends easily.And even watching Tv much it can cause eyesight problems.
Having looked at both sides television has become such an essential part of our daily lives,that it is veey to imagine life without television.Even though it has more drawbacks for people mainly children's future.In my view we should determine to the children when they can watch Tv and when they must stop it
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also, however, if, look, so, still, in addition, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1495.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24561403509 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11181586354 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617543859649 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.3802160716 49.4020404114 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 186.875 106.682146367 175% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.625 20.7667163134 172% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.75 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25572742139 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10466237489 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564272199126 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10466237489 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0564272199126 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.1 13.0946893788 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.41 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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