Unfortunately money is often considered such as a measure of success , but I don't agree with this opinion and I will try to explain why .
First of all we can remember famouse artists who were very succesful , but they have never thought to earn a lot of money to be succesful person. For instance a Georgian famouse artist Nikolz Pirosmanishvili ( Nikala) was very poore person , but succesful because of his talantes . Money is not the mesure of success .
Secondly and very important argument is that we can't buy succesful it is imposible . For example we can't buy dream or sense .
In addition if you earn a lot of money - it doesn't know that you are succesful, because in the samy time you might be very miserable person . You won't earn all the money , so you must to have time ,keep your time for happiness and only then you can be considered as succesful person.
In conclusion - a lot of money is not equal to succesful , just happy person is succesful person and onlu for these people is opened all doos and wide all ways to success !
- 131) Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Only people who earn a lot of money are successful. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 33
- 131) Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Only people who earn a lot of money are successful. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 33
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Educating children is a more difficult task today than it was in the past because they spend so much time on cell phone, online games, and social networking Web site. Use specific reasons and examples 60
- Some people say that TV advertisements have benefits, while others believe the opposite. Discuss both the views, give your own opinion and include examples from your experience. 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, then, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.6327345309 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.9520958084 39% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 11.1786427146 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 13.6137724551 22% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 28.8173652695 69% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 55.5748502994 31% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 16.3942115768 18% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 847.0 2260.96107784 37% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 185.0 441.139720559 42% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57837837838 5.12650576532 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 4.56307096286 81% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54542330835 2.78398813304 91% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 204.123752495 52% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578378378378 0.468620217663 123% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 705.55239521 39% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.96107784431 20% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.76447105788 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.67365269461 179% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 19.7664670659 46% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 22.8473053892 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9659713956 57.8364921388 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1111111111 119.503703932 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5555555556 23.324526521 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.3333333333 5.70786347227 234% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 47.0 5.25449101796 894% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.20758483034 37% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.88822355289 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17684890961 0.218282227539 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0759230603117 0.0743258471296 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555204018051 0.0701772020484 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0902022065487 0.128457276422 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0556759835901 0.0628817314937 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 14.3799401198 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.3550499002 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.197005988 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 12.5979740519 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.93 8.32208582834 83% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 98.500998004 27% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 12.3882235529 89% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.1389221557 90% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.9071856287 84% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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