6. A recent sales study indicates that consumption of seafood dishes in Bay City restaurants has increased by 30 percent during the past five years. Yet there are no currently operating city restaurants whose specialty is seafood. Moreover, the majority of families in Bay City are two-income families, and a nationwide study has shown that such families eat significantly fewer home-cooked meals than they did a decade ago but at the same time express more concern about healthful eating. Therefore, the new Captain Seafood restaurant that specializes in seafood should be quite popular and profitable.
The above lines from a recent sales study state that comsumption of seafood dishes in Bay City restaurants has increased by 30 percent during the past 5 years. The study claims that yet there are no operating restaurants currently whose speciality is sea food. Further, the majority of families in the Bay City are two-income families, and a nationwide study has shown that they prefer going to restauarants for meals rather than home-cooked meals than they did a decade ago provided they do have a conern about healthy eating. The author suggests that new Captiain Seafood restaurant famous for its seafood should be profitalbe and quite popular. Before we analyze the author's argument further, three questions have to answered respectively.
Firstly, Is there any evidence supporting the claim that the consumption of seafood dishes across the Bay City has increased over the past 5 years? The author's argument to be pragmatic is quite vague and unclear as there is no enough evidence such as facts and surveys supporting his argument. Additionally the author argues stating that there are no currently operating seafood restaurants in city and such claim has to be supported with proper evidence and as it has failed to so, it can be considered vague. So due to these reasons, the argument does not hold firm .
Secondly, there has been a nation wide study claiming that the majority of the families are two income families and prefer eating meals in a restaurant rather than at home. This above study has been a comprehensive survey conducted accross the entire country and is no where subjected to the Bay City alone. There has been no evidence such as surveys and statistics involving families living in the Bay City about their food preferences. Without proper evidence in the Bay City alone, the conclusion drawn in the initial argument is gradually weakened.
Thirdly, the author arugues that the new Captain Seafood restaurant that specializes in seafood to be quite popular across the Bay City. Prior to this, there been no certain evidence such as facts and statistics about the restaurant and its fame in specializing the seafood cuisine. And futher evidence has to be collected about the verdict or the reviews that it has garnered from the people of the Bay City for it to be considered popular and profitable across the city. Until then the above argument does not hold water.
In conclusion, as the author's argument is not supported with proper evidence such as surveys and statistics the author's claim may not be right and the above argument does not hold firm.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: ??? out of 6
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 18 15
No. of Words: 432 350
No. of Characters: 2118 1500
No. of Different Words: 184 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.559 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.903 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.59 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 150 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 115 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 81 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 46 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 24 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.171 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.556 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.366 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.557 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.107 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 671, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
...nd quite popular. Before we analyze the authors argument further, three questions have ...
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Line 3, column 153, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
...as increased over the past 5 years? The authors argument to be pragmatic is quite vague...
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Line 3, column 295, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Additionally,
...ts and surveys supporting his argument. Additionally the author argues stating that there a...
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Line 3, column 338, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...itionally the author argues stating that there are no currently operating seafood...
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Line 3, column 484, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...per evidence and as it has failed to so, it can be considered vague. So due to th...
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Line 3, column 570, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...reasons, the argument does not hold firm . Secondly, there has been a nation wid...
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Line 5, column 28, Rule ID: NATION_WIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nationwide'?
Suggestion: nationwide
...old firm . Secondly, there has been a nation wide study claiming that the majority of the...
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Line 5, column 267, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...ucted accross the entire country and is no where subjected to the Bay City alone. ...
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Line 7, column 474, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Until” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...popular and profitable across the city. Until then the above argument does not hold w...
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Line 9, column 23, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
...not hold water. In conclusion, as the authors argument is not supported with proper e...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, may, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, as to, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.6327345309 117% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.9520958084 23% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 11.1786427146 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 13.6137724551 88% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 28.8173652695 87% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 55.5748502994 90% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 16.3942115768 110% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2158.0 2260.96107784 95% => OK
No of words: 432.0 441.139720559 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99537037037 5.12650576532 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55901411391 4.56307096286 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63081851219 2.78398813304 94% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 204.123752495 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.435185185185 0.468620217663 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 677.7 705.55239521 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.76447105788 91% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.22255489022 118% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 19.7664670659 91% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.8473053892 105% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4301636046 57.8364921388 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.888888889 119.503703932 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 23.324526521 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22222222222 5.70786347227 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.25449101796 190% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.20758483034 85% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 6.88822355289 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344457082626 0.218282227539 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123050467346 0.0743258471296 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126256344911 0.0701772020484 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188225349541 0.128457276422 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127074893898 0.0628817314937 202% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 14.3799401198 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.3550499002 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.197005988 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.5979740519 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.32208582834 99% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 98.500998004 95% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 12.3882235529 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.1389221557 104% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.9071856287 118% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.