Arctic deer live on islands in Canada's arctic regions. They search for food by moving over ice from island to island during the course of the year. Their habitat is limited to areas warm enough to sustain the plants on which they feed and cold enough, at least some of the year, for the ice to cover the sea separating the islands, allowing the deer to travel over it. Unfortunately, according to reports from local hunters, the deer populations are declining. Since these reports coincide with recent global warming trends that have caused the sea ice to melt, we can conclude that the purported decline in deer populations is the result of the deer's being unable to follow their age-old migration patterns across the frozen sea.
Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.
Deer
Reports of local hunters - may not be representative
Coincide - correlated, not causative relationship - other examples are plausible.
global warming may not
The argument states that arctic deer are experiencing a decline in their populations in Canada's arctic regions. Though its assessment may be possible, its evidence is rather lacking and relies heavily on unproven assumptions. Therefore, the argument yields an incomplete and insufficient report with many gaping points of evidence.
The first issue comes from the evidence that reports from local deer hunters inform the decline of the deer population. There is no indication of the accuracy and representativeness of these reports. The subjective experiences of the deer hunters may not reflect the actual deer population. It is possible that most deer hunters live in the warmer regions of the arctic regions and the deer have moved further north away from the hunters. A more rigorous assesssment is necessary to accurately inform the deer population. In addition since the reports are from some local deer hunters, it may be possible that even if they are correct that their region has experiences a decrease in deer numbers, other regions may be instead flourishing or consistent in population. A simple examination of the reporting metric reveals that the premise of the argument itself is on precarious grounds. More rigorous, more accurate and more representative surveys and studies are necessary to properly stregthen the argument and prove without a doubt that deer populations are decreasing.
The argument continues to stumble however even if deer populations are proven to decreasing. It claims that global warming trends making sea ice to melt are the direct cause when the argument is not supported. There only exists a correlation between the two events as the argument states that the events coincide at the same moment. While it is plausible, there could be many causes and those other causes could be much more important than the global warming trends. One plausible explanation could be an upsurge of predators such as grey wolves and bears that efficiently hunt arctic deer and cull their numbers. Another sufficient explanation could disease epidemics and pandemics that spread efficiently in deer populations and wipe them out. From a fundmental understading of the difference between correlation and causation and numerous examples, it is shown that the argument's claim is not adequately explained at all and can much better be explained by other theories.
A careful and thorough analysis of the argument shows that its claims are grossly inadequate and lacking sufficient proof. There are numerous other explanations that can be more satisfactory and likely to occur. There needs to be better research to support its initial premise of decreasing deer population and causative link between its two events to properly become a valid claim.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Global
...onship - other examples are plausible. global warming may not The argument state...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s are plausible. global warming may not The argument states that arctic deer are...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...curately inform the deer population. In addition since the reports are from some local d...
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'while', 'in addition', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.238866396761 0.25644967241 93% => OK
Verbs: 0.151821862348 0.15541462614 98% => OK
Adjectives: 0.135627530364 0.0836205057962 162% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0587044534413 0.0520304965353 113% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0323886639676 0.0272364105082 119% => OK
Prepositions: 0.107287449393 0.125424944231 86% => OK
Participles: 0.0303643724696 0.0416121511921 73% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.92232160876 2.79052419416 105% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0182186234818 0.026700313972 68% => OK
Particles: 0.00202429149798 0.001811407834 112% => OK
Determiners: 0.0971659919028 0.113004496875 86% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0242914979757 0.0255425247493 95% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0101214574899 0.0127820249294 79% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2951.0 2731.13054187 108% => OK
No of words: 464.0 446.07635468 104% => OK
Chars per words: 6.3599137931 6.12365571057 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64119157421 4.57801047555 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.42025862069 0.378187486979 111% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.323275862069 0.287650121315 112% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.230603448276 0.208842608468 110% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.155172413793 0.135150697306 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92232160876 2.79052419416 105% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 207.018472906 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.474137931034 0.469332199767 101% => OK
Word variations: 53.5276184988 52.1807786196 103% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 20.039408867 110% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0909090909 23.2022227129 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3145443217 57.7814097925 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.136363636 141.986410481 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0909090909 23.2022227129 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.454545454545 0.724660767414 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 5.14285714286 136% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 3.58251231527 84% => OK
Readability: 53.4184952978 51.9672348444 103% => OK
Elegance: 1.55 1.8405768891 84% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341352887827 0.441005458295 77% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.125178252702 0.135418324435 92% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0665894063358 0.0829849096947 80% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.576909276495 0.58762219726 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.18971684774 0.147661913831 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137776681805 0.193483328276 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642720698276 0.0970749176394 66% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.24446535857 0.42659136922 57% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.187609822038 0.0774707102158 242% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140118368052 0.312017818177 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124744040901 0.0698173142475 179% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.33743842365 96% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 6.87684729064 131% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.82512315271 104% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 6.46551724138 46% => OK
Negative topic words: 7.0 5.36822660099 130% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.82389162562 177% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 14.657635468 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 63.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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