In an attempt to improve highway safety, Prunty County last year lowered its speed limit from 55 to 45 miles per hour on all county highways. But this effort has failed: the number of accidents has not decreased, and, based on reports by the highway patrol, many drivers are exceeding the speed limit. Prunty County should instead undertake the same kind of road improvement project that Butler County completed five years ago: increasing lane widths, resurfacing rough highways, and improving visibility at dangerous intersections. Today, major Butler County roads still have a 55 mph speed limit, yet there were 25 percent fewer reported accidents in Butler County this past year than there were five years ago.
The argument concludes that, Prunty County should undertake the same kind of road improvement project similar to Butler county and improve the highway safety. This conclusion is solely based on the improving the quality of the roads and has failed to address important differences between the two county's, the other possible reasons which serve the purpose of highway safety in the butler county and the potential problems with the cited statistics.
Firstly, The memo assumes that Butler and Prunty are similar in terms management and hence follow the footsteps of butler county to mend the safety issues of Prunty County.But, The reason for the road improvising works taken in Butler county is due to the blatant remarks given by the National Highways Authority for its damaged roads and less amount of visibility provided to the people travelling on the highways at the dangerous intersections.Moreover many people travelling in butler county highways have written to its management for improving the road qualities in the feedback box placed after facing the lack of resources.So, It is not possible to compare the two.
Secondly, The memo assumes that since the butler county prefer in improving the road quality keeping the same speed limit so would the Prunty County.But this not might be so.Since , The recent survey conducted on the Butler country stated that the county has put in tremendous efforts into highway traffic supervision in all the possible digital means wherein the people are supposed to follow dedicated lanes based on their speeds else would be charged with huge penalties in case of outrage.Therefore following the same policy of butler county might not give Prunty County the same impact.
However, It is possible that the improving road works might increase the highway road safety in the Prunty County, But claiming this as the sole reason cannot decrease the accidents.The Prunty County should instead conduct the survey on the ample amount of size to identify the actual reason for the accidents .Therefore, The claim introduced is very weak in logic and is open to discussion.
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e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 7 15
No. of Words: 348 350
No. of Characters: 1743 1500
No. of Different Words: 170 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.319 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.009 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.388 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 150 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 89 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 56 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 36 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 49.714 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 25.376 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.857 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.521 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.773 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.146 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.6327345309 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.9520958084 62% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 11.1786427146 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 13.6137724551 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 28.8173652695 45% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 55.5748502994 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 16.3942115768 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1777.0 2260.96107784 79% => OK
No of words: 341.0 441.139720559 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21114369501 5.12650576532 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.56307096286 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7199474167 2.78398813304 98% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 204.123752495 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.50146627566 0.468620217663 107% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 705.55239521 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.76447105788 91% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.22255489022 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 19.7664670659 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 68.0 22.8473053892 298% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 189.989473393 57.8364921388 328% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 355.4 119.503703932 297% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 68.2 23.324526521 292% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 18.2 5.70786347227 319% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 5.25449101796 305% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.20758483034 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 6.88822355289 15% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292786251486 0.218282227539 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.185213169132 0.0743258471296 249% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0169109969086 0.0701772020484 24% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197088455697 0.128457276422 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0330456688227 0.0628817314937 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 37.2 14.3799401198 259% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 2.46 48.3550499002 5% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.1628742515 156% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 29.8 12.197005988 244% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.12 12.5979740519 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.04 8.32208582834 133% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 98.500998004 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 12.3882235529 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 29.2 11.1389221557 262% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 11.9071856287 252% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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