Author suggests reduction of mopeds will deteriorate accidents in Balmer island.the given assumptions and conclusion does not support statement.
Firstly, even if population increases during summer the tourists may not use mopeds,they might prefer walking or public transport for site seeing .Rental mopeds must be given by checking there driving licence ,issuing mopeds with out any safety measures may lead to accidents
Secondly, people in balmer must follow safety measures and strictly follow traffic rules, traffic education must be provided to eliminate minor accidents , limited number of people must travel on mopeds all these must be observed by police officers as it highly visited tourist spot.
Thirdly, in Seaville accidents are reduced by decreasing rental mopeds that may be a different condition where all other indigenous moped users follow rules and regulations and roads in seaville differ from Balmer Island where this example may not work for this case.
In conclusion the accident rate may have some other reasons but not entirely on rental mopeds.
- 1.Arctic deer live on islands in Canada's arctic regions. They search for food by moving over ice from island to island during the course of the year. Their habitat is limited to areas warm enough to sustain the plants on which they feed and cold enough, 33
- On Balmer Island, where mopeds serve as a popular form of transportation, the population increases to 100,000 during the summer months. To reduce the number of accidents involving mopeds and pedestrians, the town council of Balmer Island should limit the 33
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 84, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , they
...g summer the tourists may not use mopeds,they might prefer walking or public transpor...
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Line 2, column 146, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...king or public transport for site seeing .Rental mopeds must be given by checking ...
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Line 2, column 147, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Rental
...ng or public transport for site seeing .Rental mopeds must be given by checking there ...
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Line 2, column 208, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... given by checking there driving licence ,issuing mopeds with out any safety measu...
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Line 2, column 225, Rule ID: WITH_OUT[1]
Message: This word is usually written together. Did you mean 'without'?
Suggestion: without
...g there driving licence ,issuing mopeds with out any safety measures may lead to acciden...
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Line 3, column 154, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...be provided to eliminate minor accidents , limited number of people must travel on...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 19.6327345309 25% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.9520958084 93% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 11.1786427146 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 13.6137724551 22% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 28.8173652695 21% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 55.5748502994 32% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 16.3942115768 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 910.0 2260.96107784 40% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 165.0 441.139720559 37% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51515151515 5.12650576532 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 4.56307096286 79% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5207226497 2.78398813304 91% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 204.123752495 56% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.69696969697 0.468620217663 149% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 705.55239521 40% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.96107784431 20% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.76447105788 11% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 19.7664670659 20% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 22.8473053892 179% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 180.903807312 57.8364921388 313% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 227.5 119.503703932 190% => OK
Words per sentence: 41.25 23.324526521 177% => OK
Discourse Markers: 20.25 5.70786347227 355% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.25449101796 114% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.20758483034 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 6.88822355289 44% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245237591278 0.218282227539 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138124804983 0.0743258471296 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065519938871 0.0701772020484 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126775888435 0.128457276422 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0607477360305 0.0628817314937 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.2 14.3799401198 175% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 21.4 48.3550499002 44% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.5 12.197005988 168% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.62 12.5979740519 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.41 8.32208582834 137% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 98.500998004 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 12.3882235529 222% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.4 11.1389221557 165% => OK
text_standard: 28.0 11.9071856287 235% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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