"Because of its spectacular natural beauty and consistent climate, Clearview should be a top choice for anyone seeking a place to retire. As a bonus, housing costs in
Clearview have fallen significantly during the past year, and real estate taxes remain lower than those in neighboring towns. Nevertheless, Clearview's mayor promises
many new programs to improve schools, streets, and public services. Retirees in Clearview can also expect excellent health care as they grow older, since the number of
physicians in the area is far greater than the national average."
According to the author that anybody who is seeking retirment should consider Clearview as their choice because of it's natural beauty and consistent climate. To add
few more points in his defence he claims that housing costs in Clearview have fallen significantly during the past year, and real estate remain lower that other
neighboring towns. Along with this he says that the mayor of Clearview has promised to give many new programs to improve schools, streets and public services. Finally
he conlcudes by saying that Retirees in Clearview can also expect excellent health care as they grow older because the number of phycicians in the area is far greater
than the national average. The conclsuion drawn by the author is absurb and contains various assumptions which have been ignored about Clearview being the top choice
for after retirement life.
Firstly the author says that the housing costs in Clearview have fallen dramatically during the past one year but the author has failed to mention the fact that why
these prices have fallen. The very passuaible explanation can be that people choose not to live in Clearview and the reason behind this can be lack of various
amenities required for living like, water, food or transportations. If this case is considered then it must be hard to live in Clearview and the author's conclusion
can be challenged. Also the author says that real estate taxes remain lower than those in neighboring towns, but fails to convience us because low taxes in not the
only thing a retired person will be looking while choosing a place to live after retirement, He will obiviously look for a place with good basic facilties required for
living and therefore if Clearview fails to provide those basic facilites then people will not opt to consider after retirement.
Secondly according to the author Clearview's mayor has promised that many new programs to improve schools, streets and public services have been made, But the major
factor in this is which author has failed to acknowledge is that how much time these programs will take to impelement, any person seeking retirement will not be wiling
to wait for few years until these basic facilities like streets and other public services are given to them. Retirees will obviously look for a place at which these
facilities are already there. Also the author has failed to mention the current suitaion of these services because in the absence of such basic facilities no retirees
will look forward to moving at Clearview.
Futhermore, Retired people might be needing constant medical care and good emergency services. While the author has mentioned that the number of phycicians in the area
is far greater than the national average but has not mentioned the number of hospitals, doctors and services provided by them. As mentioned earlier mediciation
facility is something retired people will surely look for before moving to a place and not just the number of physicians present in that area.
Hence, Clearview might be a choice by the retired people beacuse of it's natural beauty and consisitent climate but until and unless above mentioned issues are not
looked into we cannot agree with the author that it must be the top choice for anyone seeking a place after retirment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, hence, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.6327345309 117% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.9520958084 139% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 11.1786427146 179% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 13.6137724551 132% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 28.8173652695 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 55.5748502994 124% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 16.3942115768 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2800.0 2260.96107784 124% => OK
No of words: 544.0 441.139720559 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14705882353 5.12650576532 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82947280553 4.56307096286 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51026224178 2.78398813304 90% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 204.123752495 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.441176470588 0.468620217663 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 844.2 705.55239521 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.471057884232 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.76447105788 23% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.70958083832 148% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.67365269461 179% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.22255489022 95% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 19.7664670659 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 22.8473053892 149% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 102.373988853 57.8364921388 177% => OK
Chars per sentence: 175.0 119.503703932 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.0 23.324526521 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 5.70786347227 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 22.0 5.15768463074 427% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 38.0 5.25449101796 723% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.20758483034 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352347631746 0.218282227539 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124893956702 0.0743258471296 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0931279448508 0.0701772020484 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106492028132 0.128457276422 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0837282140568 0.0628817314937 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.8 14.3799401198 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 48.3550499002 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 12.197005988 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.5979740519 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.32208582834 100% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 98.500998004 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 12.3882235529 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 11.1389221557 140% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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