The author brings into perspective the recommendations of two different sections of people. One section of them considers that it is beneficial to add an extra lane and other section of people believe addition of bicycle line would reduce the traffic congestion. Although the discussion appears to be true, it does not provide any logical and statistical data.
The first recommendation involves people suggesting an addition of lane. However, the author did not provide any data on what is the major cause for the congestion of traffic. If the existing lane is not sufficient for the population, it would be fruitful to add a lane but without considering any other factors, the author cannot claim that addition of lane would reduce congestion. Moreover, the author should also have considered the time period of traffic congestion. Whether it occurs during peak periods of a day or it remains same all the time. In addition, he compared it with Green highway Which is fallacious. The conditions of green highway and blue high way may be different in terms of demographic conditions, population and road condition and the condition in green high way might be different from previous year till the next year.
The second assumption is addition of a bicycle lane which seems to be good but has many drawbacks when observed from the people’s side. The author made a point that residents of Blur highway are keen in bicycling, but did not provide data on how many people were surveyed and the people who were surveyed had their own vehicles for commuting. Additionally, the author did not give information on whether the residents were interested to bicycle for long distances or short distances. Because, it is difficult to do cycling for long distances and without people’s opinion, it would be a bad proposal.
To conclude, the author did not provide sufficient information on the number of people surveyed and the statistical data. So, the discussion seems to be fallacious and can be looked further by collecting information on the given points mentioned.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 341 350
No. of Characters: 1685 1500
No. of Different Words: 167 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.297 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.941 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.768 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 124 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 99 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 69 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 47 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.312 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.737 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.562 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.341 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.524 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.102 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 142, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...n observed from the people's side. The author made a point that residents of B...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, may, moreover, second, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.6327345309 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.9520958084 69% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 11.1786427146 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 13.6137724551 51% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 28.8173652695 49% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 55.5748502994 76% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 16.3942115768 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1736.0 2260.96107784 77% => OK
No of words: 341.0 441.139720559 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09090909091 5.12650576532 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.56307096286 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90814477094 2.78398813304 104% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 204.123752495 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507331378299 0.468620217663 108% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 705.55239521 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 11.0 8.76447105788 126% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 19.7664670659 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.8473053892 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7691869294 57.8364921388 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.5 119.503703932 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3125 23.324526521 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6875 5.70786347227 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.25449101796 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.20758483034 73% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 6.88822355289 15% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.67664670659 192% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127803727948 0.218282227539 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0442295828236 0.0743258471296 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0358646926737 0.0701772020484 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.069602389405 0.128457276422 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0483424734167 0.0628817314937 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 14.3799401198 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.3550499002 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.197005988 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.5979740519 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.32208582834 96% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 98.500998004 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 12.3882235529 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.1389221557 93% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.9071856287 67% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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