The figure given here illustrates the steps involved in the production and recycling of glass containers and bottles. It involves a series of complicated steps and controlled conditions to produce glass bottles and also to recycle them.
Firstly, the procedure involves the mixing of sand, soda ash and limestone with some other chemicals which are then melted at approximately 1500 degree celsius temperature in a glass furnace. The molten glass is then moulded into shape by blowing which results in a perfectly shaped glass container.
For recycling glass, the utilised glass materials are to be collected and sorted according to colour. After sorting, they are washed to remove any impure materials present on them. Before moulding them, they are crushed and melted to form new products such as glass bottles.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, so, then, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 694.0 965.302439024 72% => OK
No of words: 130.0 196.424390244 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33846153846 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.37664837539 3.73543355544 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66331643593 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.676923076923 0.547539520022 124% => OK
syllable_count: 212.4 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.5984693529 43.030603864 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1428571429 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5714285714 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 5.23603664747 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174262175298 0.215688989381 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0838406141812 0.103423049105 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483760059968 0.0843802449381 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114511075927 0.15604864568 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0283335268069 0.0819641961636 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.0 8.06136585366 124% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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