Fifteen years ago, Omega University implemented a new procedure that encouraged students to evaluate the teaching effectiveness of all their professors. Since that time, Omega professors have begun to assign higher grades in their classes, and overall student grade averages at Omega have risen by 30 percent. Potential employers, looking at this dramatic rise in grades, believe that grades at Omega are inflated and do not accurately reflect student achievement; as a result, Omega graduates have not been as successful at getting jobs as have graduates from nearby Alpha University. To enable its graduates to secure better jobs, Omega University should terminate student evaluation of professors.
Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.
The argument states that because of the implentation of the new procedure of student evaluating teaching effectiveness of their professors, their grades have gone up and hence, employers thinks the grades to be inflated and not accurately showing students results due to which students are unable to secure jobs.So, in order to increase placement percentage , the University is thinking to terminate the procedure.However, the reasons provided in the argument are flawed and conatin insufficient data make the decision of scrapping the evaluation procedure.
Firstly,The argument asserts that it is due to the evalution system that the professors have started assigning higher grades.But nowhere it is metioned how much significance the system holds onto the professors job.Maybe,it is just to indicate the areas where the professors needs improvement in terms of teaching and has no impact on his job .Then, it is very unlikely that they will be assigning higher grades to students without any reason.
Secondly, The reason of low placement percenatge of Omega University students maybe due to their lack of preperation .When interviewing for a job a lot of factors are counted.The interviwee looks not just at the grades but his/her basic knowledge in the field he is applying , prior internship experiences.The students of Alpha University might have prepared better with better resumes as compared to the students of the Omega University due to which they are able to get job .Hence, the evaluation system is not at fault here .The University should rather modify their curriculum and enviorment in order to promote students to prepare better .
The reasons stated above indicate that the assumption of the evaluation procedure being the root cause is flawed.Insufficient data is provided with which the decision of termination of the procedure shouldn't be passed.Rather,statistical data and study of the consequence of passing such a decison should also have been represented to strenghthen their position.
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e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 9 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 12 2
No. of Sentences: 6 15
No. of Words: 325 350
No. of Characters: 1665 1500
No. of Different Words: 167 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.246 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.123 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.84 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 127 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 98 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 77 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 49 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 54.167 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 28.115 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.667 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.475 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.788 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.103 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.6327345309 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.9520958084 31% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 11.1786427146 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 13.6137724551 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 28.8173652695 69% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 55.5748502994 83% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 16.3942115768 110% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1708.0 2260.96107784 76% => OK
No of words: 312.0 441.139720559 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47435897436 5.12650576532 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.56307096286 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.32381710404 2.78398813304 119% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 204.123752495 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.468620217663 115% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 705.55239521 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.76447105788 114% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 19.7664670659 20% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 78.0 22.8473053892 341% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 108.342916243 57.8364921388 187% => OK
Chars per sentence: 427.0 119.503703932 357% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 78.0 23.324526521 334% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 21.0 5.70786347227 368% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 27.0 5.25449101796 514% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.20758483034 24% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 6.88822355289 15% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330708871553 0.218282227539 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.181659214343 0.0743258471296 244% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061007680361 0.0701772020484 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181659214343 0.128457276422 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.061007680361 0.0628817314937 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 43.3 14.3799401198 301% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -16.15 48.3550499002 -33% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.1628742515 239% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 34.9 12.197005988 286% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.63 12.5979740519 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.96 8.32208582834 144% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 98.500998004 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 12.3882235529 242% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 33.2 11.1389221557 298% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 11.9071856287 252% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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