The following appeared in an article written by Dr. Karp, an anthropologist."Twenty years ago, Dr. Field, a noted anthropologist, visited the island of Tertia andconcluded from his observations that children in Tertia were reared by an entire village

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The following appeared in an article written by Dr. Karp, an anthropologist.

"Twenty years ago, Dr. Field, a noted anthropologist, visited the island of Tertia and

concluded from his observations that children in Tertia were reared by an entire village

rather than by their own biological parents. However, my recent interviews with children

living in the group of islands that includes Tertia show that these children spend much more

time talking about their biological parents than about other adults in the village. This

research of mine proves that Dr. Field's conclusion about Tertian village culture is invalid

and thus that the observation-centered approach to studying cultures is invalid as well. The

interview-centered method that my team of graduate students is currently using in Tertia will

establish a much more accurate understanding of child-rearing traditions there and in other

island cultures."

In the given arguement, Dr. Karp claims that an observation-centered approach to studying cultures is invalid, whereas, interview-centered method is more accurate. While evaluating this claim, one needs to look into the following three aspects to validate Dr. Karp arguement.

Firstly, Dr. Karp has compared his study, which were conducted recently, with Dr. Field's study, which was conducted 20 years ago. It is important to understand that the demographics, economy or other social factors of any place changes with time. It is possible that the study conducted by Dr. Field was in completely different setting 20 years ago. For example, it is poosible that 20 years ago, the economy in Tertia was not very good and the parents would travel to neighbouring islands for long periods of time to earn livelihood for their families. If such was the case, it is possible that a family with a young child, would depend on their village folks for looking after their child when they would be away for work.

It is also possible that 20 years ago, the number of children in Teretia was much less than the number of adult or senior citizens. In such condition, it is possible that the entire village would help in the rearing the young ones for they were the future of Tertia. If any of the above mentioned scenarios is to be true, the comparision of the studies would prove to be invalid.

Secondly, Dr. Karp should also consider the factor of how similar is Tertia to its neighbouring islands. It is possible that the neighboring islands are very different than Tertia. That is, it is possible that the peripheral islands major source of income is through farming. Thus, a family of farmers won't have to stay away from their respective homes and can look after their kids themselves. It is also possible that the rest of the islands are parochial and don't let the women assume any other role than being a mother and a housekeeper. If this is to be true, one parent is always present to look after their child and thus is not dependent on any other member of the village. Also, it is not necessary that if a child talks more about his bological parents than any other adult, that he is raised only by his parents.

Thus many factors are to be considered before validating Dr. Karp's claim.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, thus, whereas, while, for example

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 36.0 19.6327345309 183% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.9520958084 54% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 11.1786427146 63% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 13.6137724551 118% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 28.8173652695 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 55.5748502994 85% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 16.3942115768 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1907.0 2260.96107784 84% => OK
No of words: 399.0 441.139720559 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77944862155 5.12650576532 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.56307096286 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63095827506 2.78398813304 95% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 204.123752495 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491228070175 0.468620217663 105% => OK
syllable_count: 580.5 705.55239521 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 4.96107784431 242% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 8.76447105788 46% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.70958083832 148% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 19.7664670659 91% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.8473053892 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.8363872881 57.8364921388 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 105.944444444 119.503703932 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1666666667 23.324526521 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 5.70786347227 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.25449101796 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.20758483034 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 6.88822355289 15% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.67664670659 192% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210116475391 0.218282227539 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670228601206 0.0743258471296 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540587960387 0.0701772020484 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113727995641 0.128457276422 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0280196432587 0.0628817314937 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 14.3799401198 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.3550499002 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.197005988 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.5979740519 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.32208582834 95% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 98.500998004 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 12.3882235529 89% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.1389221557 97% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.9071856287 92% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 18 15
No. of Words: 401 350
No. of Characters: 1845 1500
No. of Different Words: 189 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.475 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.601 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.558 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 115 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 87 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 53 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 33 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.278 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.445 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.722 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.34 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.559 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.093 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5