In a letter written to Balmer Island Gazette, author of the letter predicts that reducing number of mopeds per rental company will reduce the accidents percentage in Balmer. Author argues for this prediction based on accident reduction in Torseau by enforcing a similar law. however, this authors argument leads to following 3 questions that needs to be answered before evaluating his prediction.
Firstly, Does increase in population means increasing number of pedistians or number of people interested to travel? It's possible that increase in population might be because of oldage people admitted to a famous hospital in balmer. In such case, increase in population will not imply more possibility of accident if these oldage citizens were bed ridden througout there stay in balemer. It's also possible that this new population is new birn babies, May be summer is the best time to deliver babies in balmer. These babies will not contribute to accidents in that summer as they will not start walking on the day one. So the author of the letter should answer about what constituted this icnreased population.
Secondly, are Balmer and Torseau comparable ? Maybe the trasport infrastucutre in Torseau can sustain limited number of mopeds and Balmer might have roads that can sustain a large numbe rof mopeds. It's possible that, Toresu's over population is less and they don't need as many mopeds as Balmer. Applying a restriction on mopeds in Balemr which might have a larger population might lead to increased pedestrians. This may in turn increase number of accidents. Thus author of the letter has to asnwer if Balmer and Torseau are comparable.
Tharidly, will decrease in number of rented mopeds per company lead to over all decrease in number of mopeds? It's possible that this restriction might lead to more companies getting opened with a limit of 30 mopeds per day. this will not lead to reduction in number of mopeds.
in conclusion, authors prediction of reducing no of accidents by restricting no of mopeds per company is based on several assumptions. author has to answer about the similarity between Balmer and Torseau, type of population that increased and restriction on total count of companies to further evaluate this prediction.
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e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 16 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 14 2
No. of Sentences: 17 15
No. of Words: 367 350
No. of Characters: 1849 1500
No. of Different Words: 170 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.377 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.038 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.655 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 159 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 98 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 72 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 46 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.588 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.846 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.529 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.358 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.573 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.084 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 143, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'accidents'' or 'accident's'?
Suggestion: accidents'; accident's
...peds per rental company will reduce the accidents percentage in Balmer. Author argues for...
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Line 1, column 276, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
... in Torseau by enforcing a similar law. however, this authors argument leads to followi...
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Line 5, column 33, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ion. Secondly, are Balmer and Torseau comparable ? Maybe the trasport infrastu...
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Line 5, column 260, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...oresus over population is less and they dont need as many mopeds as Balmer. Applying...
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Line 7, column 63, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e in number of rented mopeds per company lead to over all decrease in number of m...
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Line 7, column 226, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: This
...ened with a limit of 30 mopeds per day. this will not lead to reduction in number of...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...ad to reduction in number of mopeds. in conclusion, authors prediction of reduc...
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Line 9, column 47, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...clusion, authors prediction of reducing no of accidents by restricting no of moped...
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Line 9, column 78, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...reducing no of accidents by restricting no of mopeds per company is based on sever...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Author
...ompany is based on several assumptions. author has to answer about the similarity betw...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, as to, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.6327345309 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.9520958084 131% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 11.1786427146 63% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 13.6137724551 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 28.8173652695 90% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 55.5748502994 117% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 16.3942115768 110% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1890.0 2260.96107784 84% => OK
No of words: 366.0 441.139720559 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16393442623 5.12650576532 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.56307096286 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72882263731 2.78398813304 98% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 204.123752495 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.478142076503 0.468620217663 102% => OK
syllable_count: 589.5 705.55239521 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.96107784431 161% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.76447105788 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 19.7664670659 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.8473053892 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.9611620488 57.8364921388 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5 119.503703932 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3 23.324526521 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.65 5.70786347227 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.25449101796 190% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.20758483034 85% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 6.88822355289 102% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.67664670659 128% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26442084188 0.218282227539 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0893245368356 0.0743258471296 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641257474514 0.0701772020484 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155896881084 0.128457276422 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.052388630959 0.0628817314937 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 14.3799401198 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.3550499002 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.197005988 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.5979740519 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.32208582834 96% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 98.500998004 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 12.3882235529 89% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.1389221557 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.9071856287 92% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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