In the given letter to the editor of Balmer Island Gazette which states that by limiting the number of mopeds rented by each island's six moped rental companies in order to reduce the number of accidents. The author came in to this conclusion based on the issues faced by Balmer Island,as the population of island aggrandized to 100,000 during the summer months. However, before this recommendation can be fully evaluated there are certain things that needs to be addresses and explained clearly.
First of all, it would be erroneous to claim that number of accidents is solely related to the increase in the number of population. In other words, one of the pivotal reasons for accidents might not be the usze of vehicles but the probably the feckleness of the driver who is driving it. For example, even with the limitations in the number of mopeds from the rental companies if people might use them very carelessly which would eventually lead to accidents and other consequences. If either of these holds any merit, than the original argument is weakened.
Secondly, restraining the moped rentals might not be the only reason for the reduction in the number of accidents in neighouring island Torseau. Perhaps, Torseau island probably gave classes to people about the prevention from accidents from moped rentals. For instance, they might have shown them the consequences when you exceed the speed of them. If the above is true then, the argument holds no water.
Moreover, author prematurely compares two the island as we are all wary about that the fact two places would have different geography. Land of Balmer Island might be different from the land of land of neighbouring island Torseau along with separate rules and regulations. This would probably enervate the original statement.
In conclusion, the argument, as it stands, is considerably flawed, due to it's relaince on several unwarranted assumptions. If the author is able to offer more pellucid recommendation on above quandaries than proposed argument might be considered viable.
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e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 9 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 335 350
No. of Characters: 1678 1500
No. of Different Words: 175 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.278 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.009 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.664 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 128 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 82 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 64 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 41 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.938 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.335 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.688 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.319 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.319 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.077 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 1 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 285, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , as
...sed on the issues faced by Balmer Island,as the population of island aggrandized to...
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Line 2, column 228, Rule ID: THE_EXACTLY_THE[1]
Message: Duplicated 'the' in the phrase: 'the probably the'. Did you mean 'probably the'?
Suggestion: probably the
...s might not be the usze of vehicles but the probably the feckleness of the driver who is driving...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 520, Rule ID: COMMA_THAN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'then'?
Suggestion: then
...es. If either of these holds any merit, than the original argument is weakened. Sec...
^^^^
Line 4, column 185, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'land of'.
Suggestion: land of
...lmer Island might be different from the land of land of neighbouring island Torseau along with ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 123, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...nce on several unwarranted assumptions. If the author is able to offer more pelluc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.6327345309 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.9520958084 85% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 11.1786427146 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 13.6137724551 59% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 28.8173652695 62% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 55.5748502994 99% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 16.3942115768 73% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1715.0 2260.96107784 76% => OK
No of words: 334.0 441.139720559 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13473053892 5.12650576532 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.56307096286 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75599574885 2.78398813304 99% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 204.123752495 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535928143713 0.468620217663 114% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 705.55239521 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.70958083832 258% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.22255489022 95% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 19.7664670659 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 22.8473053892 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4230744121 57.8364921388 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.1875 119.503703932 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.875 23.324526521 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.3125 5.70786347227 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.25449101796 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.20758483034 37% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 6.88822355289 131% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.67664670659 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259366678745 0.218282227539 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0775396223398 0.0743258471296 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103437760668 0.0701772020484 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136032425217 0.128457276422 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122598741165 0.0628817314937 195% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 14.3799401198 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.3550499002 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.197005988 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.5979740519 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.32208582834 104% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 98.500998004 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 12.3882235529 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.1389221557 90% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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