Surely, there has been no time in history where the lives of people have changed more dramatically. People who are potent in certain field such business, politics, education and government should bogged down after serving for require amount of time. I certainly concur with the author's claim that indicates in order to bring change one must need to work with different minds hence, reinvigorating new leadership.
At the outset,there are myriad of reasons for any leader to step down after five years of time for the overall betterment of the society. To conconct youth and to handover the responsibility of handling consequences in their respective field, they need to experience things on their own rather than having only theoritical knowledge about it. For example, if a person is erudite and have read plethora of books written by politicians but didn't have a chance to be in the field and talk with people or put forward his idea regarding the development of the field, then it will all be absurd.
To have a pragmatic knowledge about any field is one of the significant step to aggrandize the company and to make it successful in future. With every passing year, new ideas and theories are engendered which needs to be addressed and implemented. In other words, just as "life is a circle from birth to death" where new life and new energy is flourished every other day making a earth a better place to live with their ebullient energy. Just like that, for achieving something in any field new minds must be given more priority.
Moreover, If we get stuck with one person for more than 5 years than the growth of an individual as well as the growth of a particular company will be stagnant. For instance, If other scientist didn't gave the opportunity or liberty to Tim Burner Lee research more in the field of the computer than we would still be reluctant about the idea of internet.
In conclusion, i completely cocord with the above claim because of it's viability it presents as we are all wary about the fact that success comes from new energy indulging in the field.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 14, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , there
...igorating new leadership. At the outset,there are myriad of reasons for any leader to...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 438, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...ora of books written by politicians but didnt have a chance to be in the field and ta...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 130, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...e the company and to make it successful in future. With every passing year, new ideas and...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 388, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...gy is flourished every other day making a earth a better place to live with their...
^
Line 4, column 194, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...gnant. For instance, If other scientist didnt gave the opportunity or liberty to Tim...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 199, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... For instance, If other scientist didnt gave the opportunity or liberty to Tim B...
^^
Line 4, column 344, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...uld still be reluctant about the idea of internet. In conclusion, i completely c...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, moreover, regarding, so, still, then, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 58.6224719101 106% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1732.0 2235.4752809 77% => OK
No of words: 361.0 442.535393258 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79778393352 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68983770196 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 215.323595506 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565096952909 0.4932671777 115% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 704.065955056 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8661223086 60.3974514979 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.230769231 118.986275619 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7692307692 23.4991977007 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.84615384615 5.21951772744 189% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23383006437 0.243740707755 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0879370626359 0.0831039109588 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0757572117888 0.0758088955206 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121523345578 0.150359130593 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446247121359 0.0667264976115 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 14.1392134831 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 48.8420337079 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 12.1743820225 103% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 100.480337079 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 14, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , there
...igorating new leadership. At the outset,there are myriad of reasons for any leader to...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 438, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...ora of books written by politicians but didnt have a chance to be in the field and ta...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 130, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...e the company and to make it successful in future. With every passing year, new ideas and...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 388, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...gy is flourished every other day making a earth a better place to live with their...
^
Line 4, column 194, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...gnant. For instance, If other scientist didnt gave the opportunity or liberty to Tim...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 199, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... For instance, If other scientist didnt gave the opportunity or liberty to Tim B...
^^
Line 4, column 344, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...uld still be reluctant about the idea of internet. In conclusion, i completely c...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, moreover, regarding, so, still, then, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 58.6224719101 106% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1732.0 2235.4752809 77% => OK
No of words: 361.0 442.535393258 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79778393352 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68983770196 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 215.323595506 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565096952909 0.4932671777 115% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 704.065955056 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8661223086 60.3974514979 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.230769231 118.986275619 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7692307692 23.4991977007 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.84615384615 5.21951772744 189% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23383006437 0.243740707755 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0879370626359 0.0831039109588 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0757572117888 0.0758088955206 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121523345578 0.150359130593 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446247121359 0.0667264976115 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 14.1392134831 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 48.8420337079 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 12.1743820225 103% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 100.480337079 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.