The following appeared in a letter to the editor of a Batavia newspaper.
"The department of agriculture in Batavia reports that the number of dairy farms throughout the country is now 25 percent greater than it was 10 years ago. During this same time period, however, the price of milk at the local Excello Food Market has increased from $1.50 to over $3.00 per gallon. To prevent farmers from continuing to receive excessive profits on an apparently increased supply of milk, the Batavia government should begin to regulate retail milk prices. Such regulation is necessary to ensure fair prices for consumers."
Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered in order to decide whether the recommendation is likely to have the predicted result. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the recommendation.
The editor of a batavia newspaper argues that batavia government should start to regulate retail milk prices to ensure fair prices for consumers. To support his/her argument, the author cites the following evidences: first, the number of dairy farms is greater than it was ten years ago; second, the price of milk increased. Tough the issue has its merit, due to lack of persuasive evidences and unaddressed assumptions, the conclusion is unsubstantiated and flawed.
To begin with, the author unfairly assumes that the cost of milk production remains stable. The assumption may seem valid at first glance, further examination curtails its credibility. even if the total quantity of milk selling increases, the farmers perhaps do not make much profit. Owing to economic development, there was an inflation in batavia. The total costs of milk production can be increasing dramatically. Technologies, hourly wage for employees, taxes and many other factors would enhance a lot. After deducting all the inputs in producing milk, the profit made by farmers probably not a large amount. The aforementioned excessive profit is unwarranted. we also do not know the demand of milk. The raising demand could result in increasing prices.
Moreover, the price of milk at local excello food market does not necessarily provide a full picture of the milk price at the entire region. If the local excello food market is the cheapest place for citizens to buy milk, then we may assume that the milk price will be much higher in other stores, substantiating the feasibility of government regulation. If, on the other hand, excello food market mainly provides organic foods and its target consumers are those from relative wealth families, then excello is not representative of the milk price of batavia to most consumers. it is, hence, unfair for the government to regulate the milk price. we are unable to draw the conclusion about the necessity of government regulation without the detailed information of milk price from all markets in batavia. Furthermore, the number of farms increases does not imply the concurrent increase in supply. The national wide elevating amount of farms is not a warranted indication of farms in batavia. even though the amount of farms increases, that in batavia does not necessarily accrete.
Last but not least, the author fails to consider the facts that most family attained higher income over the past ten years. even though the milk price increased from $1.50 to over $3.00 per gallon, most individuals can still afford it. The new price is considered as fair to most people. The author, in addition, fails to consider the effectiveness of government intervention. The farmers would come up with many ways to earn profit under government regulation, even inducing severer impacts. Say, for example, farms can add more water to milk in the production which can decrease the overall quality of the milk. Or alternatively, they use some medicine or spur to make the life cycle of cows shorter to have greater output, and medicines can negatively affect citizens. The regulation cannot be readily implemented without considering all the disadvantages incurred.
To sum up, as it stands, the argument by the editor is based on several questionable assumptions that weaken its validity. In order to further strengthen the conclusion, the author is recommended to provide the evidences as follows: first, the milk prices from all the local stores in batavia are increasing largely; second, check whether the cost of milk production has increases fairly and whether the price is fair to consumers; finally, the income and GDP of the area is not increased a lot, thus preventing them to afford the milk at current price.
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argument 1:
The department of agriculture in Batavia reports that the number of dairy farms throughout the country is now 25 percent greater than it was 10 years ago. During this same time period, however, the price of milk at the local Excello Food Market has increased from $1.50 to over $3.00 per gallon.
argument 2:
To prevent farmers from continuing to receive excessive profits on an apparently increased supply of milk,
argument 3:
the Batavia government should begin to regulate retail milk prices. Such regulation is necessary to ensure fair prices for consumers.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 4.0 out of 6
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 25 15
No. of Words: 608 350
No. of Characters: 3046 1500
No. of Different Words: 283 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.966 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.01 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.725 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 222 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 157 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 108 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 80 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 24.32 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 16.67 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.52 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.285 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.473 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.101 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, hence, if, may, moreover, second, so, still, then, thus, for example, in addition, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.6327345309 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.9520958084 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 11.1786427146 89% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 13.6137724551 51% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 28.8173652695 76% => OK
Preposition: 84.0 55.5748502994 151% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 16.3942115768 152% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3151.0 2260.96107784 139% => OK
No of words: 607.0 441.139720559 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19110378913 5.12650576532 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.96360453597 4.56307096286 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82678866056 2.78398813304 102% => OK
Unique words: 305.0 204.123752495 149% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502471169687 0.468620217663 107% => OK
syllable_count: 979.2 705.55239521 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 24.0 8.76447105788 274% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 2.70958083832 221% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.22255489022 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 19.7664670659 157% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.8473053892 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 71.6948818774 57.8364921388 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.64516129 119.503703932 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5806451613 23.324526521 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35483870968 5.70786347227 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.25449101796 228% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.20758483034 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 6.88822355289 102% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.67664670659 235% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0920079153489 0.218282227539 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0284571949068 0.0743258471296 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498671657935 0.0701772020484 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0670830795187 0.128457276422 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0649928726537 0.0628817314937 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 14.3799401198 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.3550499002 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.197005988 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.5979740519 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.32208582834 105% => OK
difficult_words: 159.0 98.500998004 161% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 12.3882235529 89% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.1389221557 86% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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