The following appeared in a letter from a homeowner to a friend.
"Of the two leading real estate firms in our town — Adams Realty and Fitch Realty — Adams Realty is clearly superior. Adams has 40 real estate agents; in contrast, Fitch has 25, many of whom work only part-time. Moreover, Adams' revenue last year was twice as high as that of Fitch and included home sales that averaged $168,000, compared to Fitch's $144,000. Homes listed with Adams sell faster as well: ten years ago I listed my home with Fitch, and it took more than four months to sell; last year, when I sold another home, I listed it with Adams, and it took only one month. Thus, if you want to sell your home quickly and at a good price, you should use Adams Realty."
Write a response in which you examine the stated and/or unstated assumptions of the argument. Be sure to explain how the argument depends on these assumptions and what the implications are for the argument if the assumptions prove unwarranted.
The above article appeared in a letter from a homeowner to a friend,the author of the argument made a comarison between the two leading real estate in their town
namely Adam and Fitch Reality.IN the comparison author claims that Adams reality is much superior than Fitch reality in tems of no of agents,their revenues in the last year and
cost of home sales average and also author posit that he had a good experiance with the Adam reality before ten years when he sold his house.Althought this arguments
seems plausible but a close level of scrutiny reveals its untenability.There are many holes in the author claims
At the first place,Author only conclude that Adam reality is superior than Fitch on the basis of number of real estate agents.But as there are 40 agents in adam Reality and
and Fitch has 25 which work only part time,but we cant conclude its superiority on this basis only,but the quality of work and the hardwork devoted by the agents
is no where mentioned in the passage and there can be possiblity that Fitch reality's agents are hard working moreover, there are less numbers of workers because some may be go
vacation tour which is also not subsume in the argument.
Secondly ,author claims that adams reality's last year revenue is twice than Fitch's,but there is also one hole that author mentioned about last year only.So there can be possiblity
that Fitch's revenue may be more than twice before the last year,so that such assumptions made by author can not be consider.Also agents in Adam may get customers instantly and
are rich so that they can pay the demanded amount without any shot so it does not means that Fitch's agents are not trying their best to achieve a grat height
Furthermore,Author has a good experiannce with Adam Reality.They have taken only one month to sold his house whereas Fitch thave taken more than four months.The claim is not conside
valid and there are no sufficient proofs are provided to suppoprt this claim,there can be possibilty that Fitch reality's agent are on leave on that period or there may be recession in the
i the economy so that Fitch's agent took more time to search the home buyer and after some condition if the economy became stable then Adam's reality found the customer very quickly.And this
is in fact not mentioned in the passage, and also market conditions are nowhere mentioned in the argument which can be reason Fitch;s took more time but this does not conclude that Adam reality is superoir than Firch
so that the author's claims are not valid.
In the conclusion,there are many hooles are there in the argument and also author failed to give strong evidences to support his claims and only basis of this baseless claims we can not conclude
that Adam's reality is superior than Fitch's Reality.In the overall Author is provided baseless and proofless evidences to show that Adam Reality is supeior.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, whereas, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 33.0 19.6327345309 168% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.9520958084 85% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 11.1786427146 197% => OK
Relative clauses : 22.0 13.6137724551 162% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 28.8173652695 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 55.5748502994 94% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 16.3942115768 43% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2436.0 2260.96107784 108% => OK
No of words: 496.0 441.139720559 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91129032258 5.12650576532 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71922212354 4.56307096286 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5855980382 2.78398813304 93% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 204.123752495 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.449596774194 0.468620217663 96% => OK
syllable_count: 758.7 705.55239521 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.67365269461 418% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.22255489022 95% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 19.7664670659 15% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 165.0 22.8473053892 722% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 439.059854183 57.8364921388 759% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 812.0 119.503703932 679% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 165.333333333 23.324526521 709% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 34.3333333333 5.70786347227 602% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 18.0 5.15768463074 349% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 42.0 5.25449101796 799% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.20758483034 24% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 6.88822355289 15% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208322415713 0.218282227539 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.159724983326 0.0743258471296 215% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0743214839717 0.0701772020484 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0805007993684 0.128457276422 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0808831695534 0.0628817314937 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 84.4 14.3799401198 587% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -87.54 48.3550499002 -181% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.1628742515 222% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 66.5 12.197005988 545% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.38 12.5979740519 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 14.91 8.32208582834 179% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 98.500998004 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 54.0 12.3882235529 436% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 68.0 11.1389221557 610% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 54.0 11.9071856287 454% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.