The following appeared in a letter from the owner of the Sunnyside Towers apartment complex to its manager.
"One month ago, all the showerheads in the first three buildings of the Sunnyside Towers complex were modified to restrict maximum water flow to one-third of what it used to be. Although actual readings of water usage before and after the adjustment are not yet available, the change will obviously result in a considerable savings for Sunnyside Corporation, since the corporation must pay for water each month. Except for a few complaints about low water pressure, no problems with showers have been reported since the adjustment. I predict that modifying showerheads to restrict water flow throughout all twelve buildings in the Sunnyside Towers complex will increase our profits even more dramatically."
Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered in order to decide whether the prediction and the argument on which it is based are reasonable. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the prediction.
The author concludes here that modifying the shower heads to restrict water flow throughout all twelve buildings in Sunnyside Tower complex will increase profits dramatically. Stated in this way, the argument fails to mention several key factors, on the basis of which the argument could be evaluated. In support of the conclusion, the author reasons that since, the restriction of water flow through the shower heads in three builds has increased their profits, it would be the same if they apply it for the all of buildings in the complex. however, careful scrutiny of the evidence reveals that it provides little credible support for the author's conclusion.
First of all, the argument readily assumes that the maximum water flow is happening through the shower heads. this is merely an assumption without much solid ground. For example, it could have been that the residents using much more water through the taps, may be they are using more water for cooking or cleaning the room or washing the cloths.
The argument also readily tells that they do not have an actual reading of the water usage before and after the adjustments were made. this is again another weak and unsupported claim as it does not demonstrate why their profit will increase regardless of it.
Finally, the author points out that there were few complains about low water pressure, and people could not able to use water. perhaps that is why the water usage has decreased. however, careful scrutiny of the evidence reveals that it provides little credible support for the author's conclusion in several critical aspects and raises skeptical questions. For example, how author is so sure about the fact that water usage decreased because of modification made in the shower head? why they haven't been able to collect data? why people are complaining? without much convincing answers to these questions, the reader is left with the impression that the claims made by the author are more of a wishful thinking rather than substantive evidence.
In conclusion, the author's argument is unpersuasive as it stands. To bolster it further, the author must provide much more concrete evidence, perhaps by detailed analysis of the readings of the water usage before and after the adjustment.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 2.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 10 15
No. of Words: 372 350
No. of Characters: 1847 1500
No. of Different Words: 180 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.392 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.965 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.444 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 137 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 107 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 63 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 34 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 37.2 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 17.577 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.7 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.44 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.733 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.099 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 543, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...or the all of buildings in the complex. however, careful scrutiny of the evidence revea...
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Line 1, column 642, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
...rovides little credible support for the authors conclusion. First of all, the argu...
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Line 5, column 111, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
... is happening through the shower heads. this is merely an assumption without much so...
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Line 5, column 258, Rule ID: MAY_BE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'maybe' (=perhaps)?
Suggestion: maybe
...using much more water through the taps, may be they are using more water for cooking o...
^^^^^^
Line 9, column 136, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...re and after the adjustments were made. this is again another weak and unsupported c...
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Line 13, column 128, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Perhaps
...and people could not able to use water. perhaps that is why the water usage has decreas...
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Line 13, column 179, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...t is why the water usage has decreased. however, careful scrutiny of the evidence revea...
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Line 13, column 278, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
...rovides little credible support for the authors conclusion in several critical aspects ...
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Line 13, column 483, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Why
...f modification made in the shower head? why they havent been able to collect data? ...
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Line 13, column 492, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...ation made in the shower head? why they havent been able to collect data? why people a...
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Line 13, column 526, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Why
... they havent been able to collect data? why people are complaining? without much co...
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Line 13, column 554, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Without
...llect data? why people are complaining? without much convincing answers to these questi...
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Line 17, column 20, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
...ntive evidence. In conclusion, the authors argument is unpersuasive as it stands. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, however, if, may, so, for example, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.6327345309 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.9520958084 62% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 11.1786427146 63% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 13.6137724551 88% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 28.8173652695 104% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 55.5748502994 81% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 16.3942115768 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1906.0 2260.96107784 84% => OK
No of words: 371.0 441.139720559 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13746630728 5.12650576532 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.56307096286 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52344662226 2.78398813304 91% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 204.123752495 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506738544474 0.468620217663 108% => OK
syllable_count: 576.0 705.55239521 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.76447105788 114% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.22255489022 118% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 19.7664670659 91% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.8473053892 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.0272839184 57.8364921388 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.888888889 119.503703932 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6111111111 23.324526521 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 5.70786347227 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.25449101796 247% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.20758483034 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 6.88822355289 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.67664670659 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154266479002 0.218282227539 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0482615069184 0.0743258471296 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0785954787549 0.0701772020484 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0811897875977 0.128457276422 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0713017248273 0.0628817314937 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 14.3799401198 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.3550499002 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.197005988 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.5979740519 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.32208582834 100% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 98.500998004 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 12.3882235529 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.1389221557 90% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.