The following memo from the new vice president of sartorian, a company that manufacture men's clothing. In the given argument, author drawn conclusion that by taking into consideration demand and overall increase in clothing prices will make Sartorian's alpaca overcoats more profitable then even before. Their several assumption made by author. Before implementing this memo let's take look at an given arguments.
Firstly, Author explained situation happen at an five years ago, there was difficulty face because of unavaliablity of high quality wool fabric. so that company fails to stop their production. Author have consideration towards stopping of production only because of unavilablity of high quality wool fabric. Their several reason for which may stop production such as cost of wool may get risen directly so that customer may refuse to buy alapaca coat.Author hold strong assumption that new supplier have put better quality of fabric, so that they can start production. Whether Author confirms it's quality, or put some criteria so they may fulfill his criteria.
Secondly, Author strongly made point in absence of Sartorian's alpaca overcoat, no other camparable product fulfill customer need.In an five year's whether no one has started an business of alpaca overcoat, whether he had done an study. In five year people mindset, thinking may change they may not ask for afford alapaca coat. Instead they ask for different fashion. Even company started production of alpaca coat whether they regorously buy an alpaca coat.
Lastly, in the statement in self an idea shown that an demand and increase in clothing price will make company more profitable as compare to even before. An assumption here increase in clothing price may leads to profit to company, whether author take survey of economy, standard of living of person. Even if increase in price of clothing will people really prefer to buy coat, instead they buy an another similar coat
who may pays less amount comparatively.
To sum up with all, author may take consideration several factor before making any conclusion. To strengthen the given argument, author provide evidence for assumption.
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e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 5.0 out of 6
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 15 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 9 2
No. of Sentences: 17 15
No. of Words: 345 350
No. of Characters: 1785 1500
No. of Different Words: 186 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.31 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.174 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.593 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 148 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 102 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 63 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 36 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.294 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.709 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.647 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.353 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.6 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.135 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 286, Rule ID: LESS_MORE_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'?
Suggestion: than
...orians alpaca overcoats more profitable then even before. Their several assumption m...
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Line 1, column 310, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun assumption seems to be countable; consider using: 'several assumptions'.
Suggestion: several assumptions
...more profitable then even before. Their several assumption made by author. Before implementing thi...
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Line 1, column 345, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Before” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...heir several assumption made by author. Before implementing this memo lets take look a...
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Line 1, column 393, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...mplementing this memo lets take look at an given arguments. Firstly, Author exp...
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Line 3, column 47, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...y, Author explained situation happen at an five years ago, there was difficulty fa...
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Line 3, column 146, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...valiablity of high quality wool fabric. so that company fails to stop their produc...
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Line 3, column 146, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “so that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...valiablity of high quality wool fabric. so that company fails to stop their production....
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Line 3, column 315, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun reason seems to be countable; consider using: 'several reasons'.
Suggestion: several reasons
...lity of high quality wool fabric. Their several reason for which may stop production such as c...
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Line 3, column 384, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...stop production such as cost of wool may get risen directly so that customer may ...
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Line 3, column 453, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Author
...customer may refuse to buy alapaca coat.Author hold strong assumption that new supplie...
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Line 5, column 130, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...amparable product fulfill customer need.In an five years whether no one has starte...
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Line 5, column 133, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...arable product fulfill customer need.In an five years whether no one has started a...
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Line 5, column 174, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...n five years whether no one has started an business of alpaca overcoat, whether h...
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Line 5, column 195, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...no one has started an business of alpaca overcoat, whether he had done an study. ...
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Line 5, column 227, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...f alpaca overcoat, whether he had done an study. In five year people mindset, thi...
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Line 5, column 328, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Instead,
...ey may not ask for afford alapaca coat. Instead they ask for different fashion. Even co...
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Line 7, column 53, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...he statement in self an idea shown that an demand and increase in clothing price w...
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Line 7, column 396, Rule ID: AN_ANOTHER[1]
Message: One of these determiners is redundant in this context. Choose only one: 'a similar' or 'another similar'.
Suggestion: a similar; another similar
...ly prefer to buy coat, instead they buy an another similar coat who may pays less amount compara...
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Line 7, column 419, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...instead they buy an another similar coat who may pays less amount comparatively. ...
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Line 10, column 51, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun factor seems to be countable; consider using: 'several factors'.
Suggestion: several factors
...with all, author may take consideration several factor before making any conclusion. To streng...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, lastly, look, may, really, second, secondly, so, then, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 19.6327345309 5% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.9520958084 108% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 11.1786427146 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 13.6137724551 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 28.8173652695 69% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 55.5748502994 81% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 16.3942115768 110% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1833.0 2260.96107784 81% => OK
No of words: 343.0 441.139720559 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34402332362 5.12650576532 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.56307096286 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69155112651 2.78398813304 97% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 204.123752495 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548104956268 0.468620217663 117% => OK
syllable_count: 578.7 705.55239521 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.70958083832 148% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.22255489022 166% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 19.7664670659 91% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.8473053892 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 62.440984483 57.8364921388 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.833333333 119.503703932 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0555555556 23.324526521 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 5.70786347227 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.15768463074 116% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.25449101796 381% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.20758483034 85% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.67664670659 128% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170035804325 0.218282227539 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0651335247932 0.0743258471296 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0936776247557 0.0701772020484 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0761150306395 0.128457276422 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0730600328618 0.0628817314937 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 14.3799401198 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 48.3550499002 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.197005988 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.5979740519 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.32208582834 99% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 98.500998004 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 12.3882235529 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.1389221557 86% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.9071856287 118% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 79.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.75 Out of 6
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