The following issue appeared in health news letter. The author had point out the issue with the help of two study's which carried out by nation wide. Even though the theory attempt up to the mark, there are to be question which ask by author before taking into consideration. So, point out the question from given health newsletter.
It's considerable point which author put in front, so an nationwide study of the effectiveness of wearing helmet increase from 35 percentage to 80 percentage. Even though, percentage my shown increasing graph, whether population rate ever taken into consideration. before 10 year people who buy bicycle are rare. and at current situation from 35 percent to 80 percent. In this ten year, was government certain rule for an bicycle. If rider who ride vehicle pay an certain amount of fine so for that fear people may use to wear people.
Another study shows that even though wearing of helmet, accident cause by bicycling increased 200 percent. The bicyclist feel safer because they are wearing helmet. is just wearing of helmet may prevent from accident? There are several thing, whether bicyclist really take training. It's not only problem of bicyclist there are several other reason present. Such as bicycle tier, it's break, seat.Tier are so slippery for applying break so they injury to bicyclist. if this thing repetitive manner, whether residential complaints to an bicycle company or give any suggestion for improvement.
Government strive held to reduce number of serious injuries from bicycle accidents by launching education program that concentrate on the factor other than helmet usage that are necessary for bicycle safety. what are question to be asked to bicyclist, and even though whether they are giving an solution to the given problems.
So to sum up with all, author may need to ask question before making any conclusion .
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 137, Rule ID: NATION_WIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nationwide'?
Suggestion: nationwide
...help of two studys which carried out by nation wide. Even though the theory attempt up to t...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 54, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ble point which author put in front, so an nationwide study of the effectiveness o...
^^
Line 3, column 265, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Before
...ion rate ever taken into consideration. before 10 year people who buy bicycle are rare...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 265, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “before” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ion rate ever taken into consideration. before 10 year people who buy bicycle are rare...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 313, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
...0 year people who buy bicycle are rare. and at current situation from 35 percent to...
^^^
Line 3, column 419, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...n year, was government certain rule for an bicycle. If rider who ride vehicle pay ...
^^
Line 3, column 461, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... bicycle. If rider who ride vehicle pay an certain amount of fine so for that fear...
^^
Line 5, column 166, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Is
... safer because they are wearing helmet. is just wearing of helmet may prevent from...
^^
Line 5, column 229, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun thing seems to be countable; consider using: 'several things'.
Suggestion: several things
...et may prevent from accident? There are several thing, whether bicyclist really take training...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 237, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'things'?
Suggestion: things
...revent from accident? There are several thing, whether bicyclist really take training...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 396, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Tier
.... Such as bicycle tier, its break, seat.Tier are so slippery for applying break so t...
^^^^
Line 5, column 465, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...ying break so they injury to bicyclist. if this thing repetitive manner, whether r...
^^
Line 5, column 532, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...nner, whether residential complaints to an bicycle company or give any suggestion ...
^^
Line 7, column 209, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: What
... that are necessary for bicycle safety. what are question to be asked to bicyclist, ...
^^^^
Line 7, column 293, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...and even though whether they are giving an solution to the given problems. So t...
^^
Line 9, column 84, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...sk question before making any conclusion .
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, really, so, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.6327345309 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.9520958084 31% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 11.1786427146 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 13.6137724551 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 28.8173652695 45% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 55.5748502994 85% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 16.3942115768 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1577.0 2260.96107784 70% => OK
No of words: 307.0 441.139720559 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13680781759 5.12650576532 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.56307096286 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62082579792 2.78398813304 94% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 204.123752495 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592833876221 0.468620217663 127% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 705.55239521 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.70958083832 185% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 19.7664670659 101% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.8473053892 66% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.2175024088 57.8364921388 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.85 119.503703932 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.35 23.324526521 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.95 5.70786347227 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.25449101796 305% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.20758483034 85% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.67664670659 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250278616701 0.218282227539 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0754027446302 0.0743258471296 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0795225946324 0.0701772020484 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116350839018 0.128457276422 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0951085656921 0.0628817314937 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 14.3799401198 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 48.3550499002 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.197005988 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.94 12.5979740519 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.32208582834 94% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 98.500998004 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 12.3882235529 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.1389221557 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.9071856287 67% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 137, Rule ID: NATION_WIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nationwide'?
Suggestion: nationwide
...help of two studys which carried out by nation wide. Even though the theory attempt up to t...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 54, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ble point which author put in front, so an nationwide study of the effectiveness o...
^^
Line 3, column 265, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Before
...ion rate ever taken into consideration. before 10 year people who buy bicycle are rare...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 265, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “before” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ion rate ever taken into consideration. before 10 year people who buy bicycle are rare...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 313, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
...0 year people who buy bicycle are rare. and at current situation from 35 percent to...
^^^
Line 3, column 419, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...n year, was government certain rule for an bicycle. If rider who ride vehicle pay ...
^^
Line 3, column 461, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... bicycle. If rider who ride vehicle pay an certain amount of fine so for that fear...
^^
Line 5, column 166, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Is
... safer because they are wearing helmet. is just wearing of helmet may prevent from...
^^
Line 5, column 229, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun thing seems to be countable; consider using: 'several things'.
Suggestion: several things
...et may prevent from accident? There are several thing, whether bicyclist really take training...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 237, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'things'?
Suggestion: things
...revent from accident? There are several thing, whether bicyclist really take training...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 396, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Tier
.... Such as bicycle tier, its break, seat.Tier are so slippery for applying break so t...
^^^^
Line 5, column 465, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...ying break so they injury to bicyclist. if this thing repetitive manner, whether r...
^^
Line 5, column 532, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...nner, whether residential complaints to an bicycle company or give any suggestion ...
^^
Line 7, column 209, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: What
... that are necessary for bicycle safety. what are question to be asked to bicyclist, ...
^^^^
Line 7, column 293, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...and even though whether they are giving an solution to the given problems. So t...
^^
Line 9, column 84, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...sk question before making any conclusion .
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, really, so, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.6327345309 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.9520958084 31% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 11.1786427146 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 13.6137724551 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 28.8173652695 45% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 55.5748502994 85% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 16.3942115768 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1577.0 2260.96107784 70% => OK
No of words: 307.0 441.139720559 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13680781759 5.12650576532 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.56307096286 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62082579792 2.78398813304 94% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 204.123752495 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592833876221 0.468620217663 127% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 705.55239521 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.70958083832 185% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 19.7664670659 101% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.8473053892 66% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.2175024088 57.8364921388 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.85 119.503703932 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.35 23.324526521 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.95 5.70786347227 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.25449101796 305% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.20758483034 85% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.67664670659 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250278616701 0.218282227539 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0754027446302 0.0743258471296 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0795225946324 0.0701772020484 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116350839018 0.128457276422 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0951085656921 0.0628817314937 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 14.3799401198 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 48.3550499002 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.197005988 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.94 12.5979740519 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.32208582834 94% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 98.500998004 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 12.3882235529 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.1389221557 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.9071856287 67% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.