The following appeared in a letter from a firm providing investment advice to a client. “Homes in the northeastern United States, where winters are typically cold, have traditionally used oil as their major fuel for heating. Last year that region experienced twenty days with below-average temperatures, and local weather forecasters throughout the region predict that this weather pattern will continue for several more years. Furthermore, many new homes have been built in this region during the past year. Because of these developments, we predict an increased demand for heating oil and recommend investment in Consolidated Industries, one of whose major business operations is the retail sale of home heating oil.
The following appeared in letter from firm providing investment advice to a clients.The author drawn conclusion on the basis of weather forecasters who predict that,The Increase in temperature increase demand for heating oil and recommend investment in consolidated industries who major operation is retail sale of heating oil. Their are several assumption made by author which needs an evidence for support assumption. Before this arguments to be succeed let's look into the given arguments.
Firstly, Author state those who are in living in northen eastern united states, where winters are typically cold, have traditionally used oil as their major fuel for heating. Whether oil is the only option for people instead they may use an different option. Even though they use oil as major fuel for heating,availability of oil in an certain ratio for fulfillment of needs of everyone.
Secondly, only on the analysis of twenty days, weather forecaster predicts next few years situation, which state that below average temperature will continue thorought the next few years. weather forecaster have evidence shows that certain changes occour
and so that forecast remain same remain for few year.It's an assumption, on the basis of twenty days, whether an change held permenantly or for just one year or an alternate year.
Thirdly, Author state that many new homes have been built in this region during the past year, so that predict that increase demand of heating oil.even though the new homes made, owner may left city and only rent basis he kept his house. so specific evidence required that whether peoples are really interested in the buying oil as major purpose. so that recommendation to made that one of whose major business is retail sale of home heating oil to be investment in consollated industries. Only on the basis of weather forecaster it may not leads to conclusion for an business to invest money for sale of home oil.
To sum up with all, author need to consider all the aspects before made conclusion. argument requires an evidence which may further strengthen arguments.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 75, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a client' or simply 'clients'?
Suggestion: a client; clients
...rom firm providing investment advice to a clients.The author drawn conclusion on the basi...
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Line 1, column 85, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...roviding investment advice to a clients.The author drawn conclusion on the basis of...
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Line 1, column 165, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , The
... of weather forecasters who predict that,The Increase in temperature increase demand...
^^^^
Line 1, column 250, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...for heating oil and recommend investment in consolidated industries who major ope...
^^
Line 1, column 330, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: There
...peration is retail sale of heating oil. Their are several assumption made by author w...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 340, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun assumption seems to be countable; consider using: 'several assumptions'.
Suggestion: several assumptions
...s retail sale of heating oil. Their are several assumption made by author which needs an evidence ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 422, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Before” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...eds an evidence for support assumption. Before this arguments to be succeed lets look ...
^^^^^^
Line 1, column 429, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...evidence for support assumption. Before this arguments to be succeed lets look into ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 239, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... option for people instead they may use an different option. Even though they use ...
^^
Line 3, column 310, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , availability
...h they use oil as major fuel for heating,availability of oil in an certain ratio for fulfillm...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 334, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...fuel for heating,availability of oil in an certain ratio for fulfillment of needs ...
^^
Line 5, column 85, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'years'' or 'year's'?
Suggestion: years'; year's
...s, weather forecaster predicts next few years situation, which state that below avera...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 189, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Weather
... continue thorought the next few years. weather forecaster have evidence shows that cer...
^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 45, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun year seems to be countable; consider using: 'few years'.
Suggestion: few years
...so that forecast remain same remain for few year.Its an assumption, on the basis of twen...
^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 54, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Its
...orecast remain same remain for few year.Its an assumption, on the basis of twenty d...
^^^
Line 6, column 54, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...orecast remain same remain for few year.Its an assumption, on the basis of twenty d...
^^^
Line 6, column 110, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...n, on the basis of twenty days, whether an change held permenantly or for just one...
^^
Line 8, column 239, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
... and only rent basis he kept his house. so specific evidence required that whether...
^^
Line 8, column 348, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...ted in the buying oil as major purpose. so that recommendation to made that one of...
^^
Line 8, column 348, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “so that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ted in the buying oil as major purpose. so that recommendation to made that one of whos...
^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 566, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ster it may not leads to conclusion for an business to invest money for sale of ho...
^^
Line 10, column 85, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Argument
...all the aspects before made conclusion. argument requires an evidence which may further ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 10, column 155, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...which may further strengthen arguments.
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, look, may, really, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.6327345309 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.9520958084 46% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 11.1786427146 45% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 18.0 13.6137724551 132% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 28.8173652695 73% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 55.5748502994 77% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 16.3942115768 91% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1761.0 2260.96107784 78% => OK
No of words: 340.0 441.139720559 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17941176471 5.12650576532 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.56307096286 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74909705214 2.78398813304 99% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 204.123752495 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538235294118 0.468620217663 115% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 705.55239521 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.70958083832 185% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 19.7664670659 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.8473053892 105% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.9299332574 57.8364921388 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.785714286 119.503703932 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2857142857 23.324526521 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 5.70786347227 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.15768463074 116% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.25449101796 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.20758483034 85% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 6.88822355289 29% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.67664670659 107% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327053435804 0.218282227539 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105654957249 0.0743258471296 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0993184911819 0.0701772020484 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141927826707 0.128457276422 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10819060721 0.0628817314937 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 14.3799401198 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.3550499002 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.197005988 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.5979740519 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.32208582834 102% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 98.500998004 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 12.3882235529 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.1389221557 104% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.9071856287 118% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.83 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.25 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 75, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a client' or simply 'clients'?
Suggestion: a client; clients
...rom firm providing investment advice to a clients.The author drawn conclusion on the basi...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 85, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...roviding investment advice to a clients.The author drawn conclusion on the basis of...
^^^
Line 1, column 165, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , The
... of weather forecasters who predict that,The Increase in temperature increase demand...
^^^^
Line 1, column 250, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...for heating oil and recommend investment in consolidated industries who major ope...
^^
Line 1, column 330, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: There
...peration is retail sale of heating oil. Their are several assumption made by author w...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 340, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun assumption seems to be countable; consider using: 'several assumptions'.
Suggestion: several assumptions
...s retail sale of heating oil. Their are several assumption made by author which needs an evidence ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 422, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Before” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...eds an evidence for support assumption. Before this arguments to be succeed lets look ...
^^^^^^
Line 1, column 429, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...evidence for support assumption. Before this arguments to be succeed lets look into ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 239, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... option for people instead they may use an different option. Even though they use ...
^^
Line 3, column 310, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , availability
...h they use oil as major fuel for heating,availability of oil in an certain ratio for fulfillm...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 334, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...fuel for heating,availability of oil in an certain ratio for fulfillment of needs ...
^^
Line 5, column 85, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'years'' or 'year's'?
Suggestion: years'; year's
...s, weather forecaster predicts next few years situation, which state that below avera...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 189, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Weather
... continue thorought the next few years. weather forecaster have evidence shows that cer...
^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 45, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun year seems to be countable; consider using: 'few years'.
Suggestion: few years
...so that forecast remain same remain for few year.Its an assumption, on the basis of twen...
^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 54, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Its
...orecast remain same remain for few year.Its an assumption, on the basis of twenty d...
^^^
Line 6, column 54, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...orecast remain same remain for few year.Its an assumption, on the basis of twenty d...
^^^
Line 6, column 110, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...n, on the basis of twenty days, whether an change held permenantly or for just one...
^^
Line 8, column 239, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
... and only rent basis he kept his house. so specific evidence required that whether...
^^
Line 8, column 348, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...ted in the buying oil as major purpose. so that recommendation to made that one of...
^^
Line 8, column 348, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “so that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ted in the buying oil as major purpose. so that recommendation to made that one of whos...
^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 566, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ster it may not leads to conclusion for an business to invest money for sale of ho...
^^
Line 10, column 85, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Argument
...all the aspects before made conclusion. argument requires an evidence which may further ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 10, column 155, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...which may further strengthen arguments.
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, look, may, really, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.6327345309 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.9520958084 46% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 11.1786427146 45% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 18.0 13.6137724551 132% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 28.8173652695 73% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 55.5748502994 77% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 16.3942115768 91% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1761.0 2260.96107784 78% => OK
No of words: 340.0 441.139720559 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17941176471 5.12650576532 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.56307096286 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74909705214 2.78398813304 99% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 204.123752495 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538235294118 0.468620217663 115% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 705.55239521 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.70958083832 185% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 19.7664670659 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.8473053892 105% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.9299332574 57.8364921388 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.785714286 119.503703932 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2857142857 23.324526521 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 5.70786347227 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.15768463074 116% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.25449101796 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.20758483034 85% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 6.88822355289 29% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.67664670659 107% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327053435804 0.218282227539 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105654957249 0.0743258471296 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0993184911819 0.0701772020484 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141927826707 0.128457276422 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10819060721 0.0628817314937 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 14.3799401198 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.3550499002 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.197005988 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.5979740519 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.32208582834 102% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 98.500998004 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 12.3882235529 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.1389221557 104% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.9071856287 118% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.83 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.25 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.