The following appeared in memorandum from the general manager of KNOW radio station.The conclusion made by author, that switching from rock-and-roll to 24-hour news will attract older listener and secure KNOW radio's future. There are several unstated assumption made by author. Before implementing this memo let us look in to given argument.
Firstly, on the basis of several factor radio station KNOW shift it's programming from rock and roll to a continuous news format. In addition, this example to explain here is that number of people in our listening area over fifty years has increased dramatically. Author correlate an decrease in popularity with increase in number of people over fifty years. so that total listeners has declined. The popularity in the sense, the repetative song, there are so many advertise may affect on listeners. Even though number of people who aged above fifty, they are not always wish to listen news, instead their are also more ready an old song. In this growing world, smart phones available
number of varities of song are available. so generally person or student ot teenger prefer to listen by smart phone. there might be other reason while another frequency radio station introduce so that people more attracted towards that
frequency station.
Secondly, author had mention an example of music recorder whose sales decreased in record music. smart phones are now available in every one hand, so the anyone who has smart device in his hand then why he spent his money, time for
recording music. But rather, if their sales goes decreasing then they might use different strategy for those who are not interested in smart phones and this thing.
Thirdly, author made strong conclusion on the basis of neighbour cities. as neighbour cities have been successful for continuous news so same should applied for KNOW radio station. Their might be different situation, so people are more involved in their work, they have strong conviction to word an work. they prefer to listen continuous news rather that rock-and-roll music.
To sum with all, author may take into consideration all factor for implementing memorandum. due to lack of missing evidences, arguments become waken arguments.
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e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 4.0 out of 6
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 13 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 9 2
No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 360 350
No. of Characters: 1817 1500
No. of Different Words: 198 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.356 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.047 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.498 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 132 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 87 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 61 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 48 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 25.714 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.518 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.857 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.344 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.614 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.122 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 85, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...e general manager of KNOW radio station.The conclusion made by author, that switchi...
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Line 1, column 252, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'assumptions'?
Suggestion: assumptions
...dios future. There are several unstated assumption made by author. Before implementing thi...
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Line 1, column 279, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Before” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ral unstated assumption made by author. Before implementing this memo let us look in t...
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Line 3, column 281, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ncreased dramatically. Author correlate an decrease in popularity with increase in...
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Line 3, column 359, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...e in number of people over fifty years. so that total listeners has declined. The ...
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Line 3, column 359, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “so that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e in number of people over fifty years. so that total listeners has declined. The popul...
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Line 3, column 474, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tative song, there are so many advertise may affect on listeners. Even though num...
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Line 3, column 480, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
... song, there are so many advertise may affect on listeners. Even though number of people...
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Line 3, column 601, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...not always wish to listen news, instead their are also more ready an old song. In thi...
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Line 4, column 43, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...mber of varities of song are available. so generally person or student ot teenger ...
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Line 4, column 118, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
...eenger prefer to listen by smart phone. there might be other reason while another fre...
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Line 4, column 236, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... that people more attracted towards that frequency station. Secondly, author h...
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Line 7, column 58, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...had mention an example of music recorder whose sales decreased in record music. ...
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Line 7, column 81, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...of music recorder whose sales decreased in record music. smart phones are now av...
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Line 7, column 100, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Smart
...whose sales decreased in record music. smart phones are now available in every one h...
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Line 7, column 153, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'anyone'?
Suggestion: the; anyone
...are now available in every one hand, so the anyone who has smart device in his hand then w...
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Line 7, column 234, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd then why he spent his money, time for recording music. But rather, if their sa...
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Line 10, column 74, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: As
...usion on the basis of neighbour cities. as neighbour cities have been successful f...
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Line 10, column 236, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... different situation, so people are more involved in their work, they have strong...
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Line 10, column 299, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...rk, they have strong conviction to word an work. they prefer to listen continuous ...
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Line 10, column 308, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...have strong conviction to word an work. they prefer to listen continuous news rather...
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Line 12, column 93, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Due
...all factor for implementing memorandum. due to lack of missing evidences, arguments...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.6327345309 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.9520958084 54% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 11.1786427146 63% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 13.6137724551 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 28.8173652695 87% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 55.5748502994 88% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 16.3942115768 73% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1876.0 2260.96107784 83% => OK
No of words: 359.0 441.139720559 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22562674095 5.12650576532 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.56307096286 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58736140811 2.78398813304 93% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 204.123752495 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587743732591 0.468620217663 125% => OK
syllable_count: 581.4 705.55239521 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.96107784431 121% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.76447105788 46% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.70958083832 185% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.22255489022 118% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 19.7664670659 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.8473053892 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.5993197223 57.8364921388 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.3333333333 119.503703932 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0952380952 23.324526521 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.95238095238 5.70786347227 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 5.15768463074 136% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 22.0 5.25449101796 419% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.20758483034 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 6.88822355289 44% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.67664670659 128% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355558664126 0.218282227539 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0946154679159 0.0743258471296 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.152836156988 0.0701772020484 218% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14518773674 0.128457276422 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109867518618 0.0628817314937 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 14.3799401198 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.3550499002 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.197005988 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.5979740519 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.32208582834 99% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 98.500998004 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 12.3882235529 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.1389221557 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.9071856287 84% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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