The following appeared in a memorandum from the owner of the Juniper Café, a small, local coffee shop in the downtown area of a small American city:
“We must reduce overhead here at the café. Instead of opening at 6 a.m. weekdays, we will now open at 8 a.m. On weekends, we will only be open from 9 a.m. until 4 p.m. The decrease in hours of operations will help save money because we won’t be paying for utilities, employee wages, or other operating costs during the hours we are closed. This is the best strategy for us to save money and remain in business without having to eliminate jobs.”
Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered in order to assess the reasonableness of both the prediction and the argument upon which it is based. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the prediction.
The argument addressed a recommendation to reduce the working houring of local coffee shop in order to reduce the operating costs and increase overall profit. This recommendation would be evaluated through answers of a set of questions that challenge this recommendation validation.
For instance, the owner of the coffee shop should provide a clear logic answer about the percent of the shop's customer and shop's visitors within the period that he/she recommended to close the shop during which. Perhaps, in these intervals of times it is expected to recieve some of the special customers that are attending this shop on daily basis. Then, the reputation and a constant percent of profit would be be reduced.
In addition, the owner need to answer about what is the reputation influence of this recommendation of reducing the operating hours daily during weekends and working days. Maybe people would think that the shop is closed for some repair works and would think that it is not a good idea to attend this shop even in the openning hours untill this assumed repair works to be finished to guarantee an acceptable service level for example.
Moreover, a question need to be answered properly regarding the amount of the money saved as a result of this recommended working hours time table. Perhaps the amount of moeny saved is not comparible to the rist that would be taken upon both reputation and percent of current customers reduction. Thus, the overall evaluation of the owner's recommendation is not the best effective way to increase shop's overall profit.
Futhermore, this shop's owner need to provide answers for questions that is wandering abou the other possible procedure and strategies that could guarantee increase in the shop's overall profit without or even with less expected risks. Maybe there are other simpler and proper ways to increase profit such as organizing an event to attract more customers for example.
These previously demonstrated questions are a sample of a set of questions that enable a proper evaluation of the coffee shop owner's recommendation validation. As well as the owner need to provide evidences and answers to all questions that might float in readers and shop's workers minds about this recommendation in order to guarantee a proper profit developement strategy.
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Comments
Essay evaluation report
Sentence: The argument addressed a recommendation to reduce the working houring of local coffee shop in order to reduce the operating costs and increase overall profit.
Error: houring Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Perhaps, in these intervals of times it is expected to recieve some of the special customers that are attending this shop on daily basis.
Error: recieve Suggestion: receive
Sentence: Maybe people would think that the shop is closed for some repair works and would think that it is not a good idea to attend this shop even in the openning hours untill this assumed repair works to be finished to guarantee an acceptable service level for example.
Error: untill Suggestion: until
Error: openning Suggestion: opening
Sentence: Perhaps the amount of moeny saved is not comparible to the rist that would be taken upon both reputation and percent of current customers reduction.
Error: comparible Suggestion: comparable
Error: rist Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: moeny Suggestion: money
Sentence: Futhermore, this shop's owner need to provide answers for questions that is wandering abou the other possible procedure and strategies that could guarantee increase in the shop's overall profit without or even with less expected risks.
Error: abou Suggestion: about
Sentence: As well as the owner need to provide evidences and answers to all questions that might float in readers and shop's workers minds about this recommendation in order to guarantee a proper profit developement strategy.
Error: developement Suggestion: development
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 9 2
No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 377 350
No. of Characters: 1913 1500
No. of Different Words: 170 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.406 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.074 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.759 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 144 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 106 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 71 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 49 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 26.929 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.868 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.571 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.381 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.676 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.095 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 6 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...on would be evaluated through answers of a set of questions that challenge this r...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...enge this recommendation validation. For instance, the owner of the coffee sh...
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Line 3, column 109, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'shops'' or 'shop's'?
Suggestion: shops'; shop's
...r logic answer about the percent of the shops customer and shops visitors within the ...
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Line 3, column 173, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'recommended closing'.
Suggestion: recommended closing
... visitors within the period that he/she recommended to close the shop during which. Perhaps, in thes...
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Line 3, column 280, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...vals of times it is expected to recieve some of the special customers that are attending th...
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Line 3, column 415, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: be
... and a constant percent of profit would be be reduced. In addition, the owne...
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Line 3, column 417, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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Suggestion:
...nd a constant percent of profit would be be reduced. In addition, the ow...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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Suggestion:
...ercent of profit would be be reduced. In addition, the owner need to answer...
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Line 5, column 262, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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Suggestion:
...ed for some repair works and would think that it is not a good idea to attend thi...
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Line 5, column 370, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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Suggestion:
...g hours untill this assumed repair works to be finished to guarantee an acceptabl...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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Suggestion:
...cceptable service level for example. Moreover, a question need to be answered...
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Line 7, column 77, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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Suggestion:
...nswered properly regarding the amount of the money saved as a result of this reco...
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Line 7, column 281, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'customers'' or 'customer's'?
Suggestion: customers'; customer's
... both reputation and percent of current customers reduction. Thus, the overall evaluation...
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Line 7, column 338, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'owners'' or 'owner's'?
Suggestion: owners'; owner's
...on. Thus, the overall evaluation of the owners recommendation is not the best effectiv...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ay to increase shops overall profit. Futhermore, this shops owner need to pro...
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Line 9, column 370, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to attract more customers for example. These previously demonstrated questio...
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Line 11, column 136, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...per evaluation of the coffee shop owners recommendation validation. As well as th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
may, moreover, regarding, so, then, thus, well, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.6327345309 81% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.9520958084 93% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 11.1786427146 98% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 13.6137724551 81% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 28.8173652695 87% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 55.5748502994 97% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 16.3942115768 128% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1949.0 2260.96107784 86% => OK
No of words: 376.0 441.139720559 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1835106383 5.12650576532 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.56307096286 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79585797359 2.78398813304 100% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 204.123752495 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.438829787234 0.468620217663 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 603.9 705.55239521 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.76447105788 68% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 19.7664670659 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.8473053892 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7493066408 57.8364921388 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.214285714 119.503703932 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8571428571 23.324526521 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.57142857143 5.70786347227 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.15768463074 116% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.25449101796 324% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.20758483034 134% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 6.88822355289 15% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0788059906566 0.218282227539 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0339217929645 0.0743258471296 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0322141908017 0.0701772020484 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0501911432541 0.128457276422 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0175625915306 0.0628817314937 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 14.3799401198 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 48.3550499002 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.197005988 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.5979740519 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.32208582834 101% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 98.500998004 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 12.3882235529 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.1389221557 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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