In the Given memorandum from the planning department of electric power company, have made several assumption on basis of Survey. The Authors gives the information about that there is no requirement of new electricity plant as Three electric generating plant satisfy our need over past twenty years. In the given memorandum an assumption made, so before this memo can be implemented following arguments taken into consideration.
Firstly From the basis of Survey, the authors made assumption that home owners eagerly wants to conserve energy. Whether this survey is taken consideration of all home owners. Even if this survey conducted for all home owners, whether they provide correct information about energy requirement.
Secondly the Manufacturer marketing home appliances such as refrigerator and air conditioning. whether this products are affordable to every home owner. As manufacturer tell about appliances are double efficient than old ones. They are unable to provide in which fact this efficiency is better. This new appliances having may be some complex part, so the home owners are most prefer old appliances. There may be a possiblity of more energy requirement for this new kind of home appliances.
Last Authors make assumption that new technology are used for home insulation and passive solar heating to reduce energy needed for home heating. There are several changes happen, in relating to transport and peoples who relocate in the same region. so there requirement may vary. There are some additional energy consumption may required which the authors must take into consideration.
From all above, the author can't directly made assumption that by only conserving energy and using an double efficient appliances there is not requirement of new electricity plant. Several fact that authors takes into consideration before making any assumption. so as there lot of missing evidences hence arguments becomes Weak Arguments.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 142, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'give'.
Suggestion: give
...umption on basis of Survey. The Authors gives the information about that there is no ...
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Line 3, column 79, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...authors made assumption that home owners eagerly wants to conserve energy. Whethe...
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Line 3, column 115, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whether” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ners eagerly wants to conserve energy. Whether this survey is taken consideration of a...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... information about energy requirement. Secondly the Manufacturer marketing home...
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Line 5, column 96, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Whether
...h as refrigerator and air conditioning. whether this products are affordable to every h...
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Line 5, column 96, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “whether” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...h as refrigerator and air conditioning. whether this products are affordable to every h...
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Line 5, column 104, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...rigerator and air conditioning. whether this products are affordable to every home o...
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Line 5, column 154, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...cts are affordable to every home owner. As manufacturer tell about appliances are ...
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Line 5, column 425, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ld appliances. There may be a possiblity of more energy requirement for this new ...
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Line 7, column 251, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...eoples who relocate in the same region. so there requirement may vary. There are s...
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Line 9, column 28, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...deration. From all above, the author cant directly made assumption that by only c...
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Line 9, column 99, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...hat by only conserving energy and using an double efficient appliances there is no...
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Line 9, column 119, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'appliance'?
Suggestion: appliance
...ng energy and using an double efficient appliances there is not requirement of new electri...
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Line 9, column 181, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun fact seems to be countable; consider using: 'Several facts'.
Suggestion: Several facts
...t requirement of new electricity plant. Several fact that authors takes into consideration b...
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Line 9, column 262, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...ideration before making any assumption. so as there lot of missing evidences hence...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.6327345309 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.9520958084 54% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 11.1786427146 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 13.6137724551 59% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 28.8173652695 52% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 55.5748502994 63% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 16.3942115768 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1653.0 2260.96107784 73% => OK
No of words: 300.0 441.139720559 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51 5.12650576532 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.56307096286 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89277068262 2.78398813304 104% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 204.123752495 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54 0.468620217663 115% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 705.55239521 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59920159681 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.22255489022 95% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 19.7664670659 96% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.8473053892 66% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.119258279 57.8364921388 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0 119.503703932 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7894736842 23.324526521 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.68421052632 5.70786347227 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.25449101796 285% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.20758483034 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 6.88822355289 29% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.67664670659 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283226131332 0.218282227539 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0890300265928 0.0743258471296 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684027469459 0.0701772020484 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154051057148 0.128457276422 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389379682914 0.0628817314937 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 14.3799401198 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 48.3550499002 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.197005988 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.38 12.5979740519 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.32208582834 106% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 98.500998004 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 12.3882235529 73% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.1389221557 72% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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