The following appeared as part of an article in a business magazine.
"A recent study rating 300 male and female Mentian advertising executives according to the average number of hours they sleep per night showed an association between the amount of sleep the executives need and the success of their firms. Of the advertising firms studied, those whose executives reported needing no more than 6 hours of sleep per night had higher profit margins and faster growth. These results suggest that if a business wants to prosper, it should hire only people who need less than 6 hours of sleep per night."
This article is sharing the data according to a survey which shows that the companies whose employees need only 6 hours of sleep can prosper. But it doesn’t state about the age factor of employees. The sleeping routine depends on the age of a person. This survey neither shows what was the age group of those executives nor their gender, whether they had healthy state of mind and how much satisfied they were with their work.
There are many other possibilities which helps company growing, like the competency of their employees, the products they are working on and how efficient those products are. Those people who sleep only 6 hours are may be old, and as we know that every field is emerging in its own way, we cannot expect older people to know about the current affairs going on in the field. We can say they are more experienced than younger ones, but every generation come up with new ideas and different techniques to operate any field.
If Only those people are hired who sleep less than 6 hours, young people will not be able to get jobs which will waste their time of getting experience. Less sleep time can also have an adverse effects on people’s mind, also there are some situations where they will get exhausted because of their routine. Some of them might be working late and couldn’t spend time with their families, this can also cause trouble for their families.
In order to grow and prosper a company should consider many aspects for the employees. From their personal life to their daily routine along with working hours. An employee should have healthy mind and flexibility to think from different point of views. They should be given enough time and space to brainstorm and shouldn’t feel pressurized to complete any task at any given time. Company should pay enough wages to its employees and organize extra-curricular activities at their place, so that they feel energized and contented with their job.
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Comments
e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 2.5 out of 6
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 6 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 337 350
No. of Characters: 1567 1500
No. of Different Words: 189 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.285 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.65 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.305 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 87 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 69 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 39 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 27 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.467 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.098 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.467 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.316 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.316 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.121 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 1 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 195, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...ess sleep time can also have an adverse effects on people’s mind, also there are some s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.6327345309 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.9520958084 116% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 11.1786427146 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 13.6137724551 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 28.8173652695 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 55.5748502994 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 16.3942115768 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1613.0 2260.96107784 71% => OK
No of words: 334.0 441.139720559 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82934131737 5.12650576532 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.56307096286 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39857734796 2.78398813304 86% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 204.123752495 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553892215569 0.468620217663 118% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 705.55239521 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59920159681 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.96107784431 141% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.67365269461 179% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 19.7664670659 76% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.8473053892 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0845652002 57.8364921388 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.533333333 119.503703932 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2666666667 23.324526521 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.46666666667 5.70786347227 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.25449101796 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.20758483034 73% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 6.88822355289 44% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.67664670659 128% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104026257185 0.218282227539 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0394732321616 0.0743258471296 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406674273884 0.0701772020484 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0687635192451 0.128457276422 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395316218952 0.0628817314937 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 14.3799401198 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 48.3550499002 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.197005988 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.5979740519 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.32208582834 92% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 98.500998004 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 12.3882235529 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.1389221557 97% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.9071856287 92% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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