The following argument was made in a newspaper editorial:
“The autonomy of any country is based on the strength of its borders; if the number of illegal immigrants entering a country cannot be checked, both its economy and national identity are endangered. Because illegal immigrants pose such threats, every effort must be made to return them to their country of origin.”
Write a response in which you examine the stated and/or unstated assumptions of the argument. Be sure to explain how the argument depends on these assumptions and what the implications are for the argument if the assumptions prove unwarranted.
The following argument is flawed for numerous reasons. primarily, the argument is based is based on the unwarrented assumption that the increasing number of illegal immigrants are the only threat to countrys' economy and national identity and returning them to there country of origin is only solution.
The argument fails to provide any justification that sending illegal immigrants back to their country will
help a country to preserve their national idendentity. For one, the number of increasing legal immigrants can also prose threat to the national identity of the country. had the argument provide some prove and data that legal immigrant are not threat to country's national identity but illegal immigrants are.
Even if the argument had provided such prove or data, there are many other unanswered questions that argument leaves, for example the argument states that illegal immigrants prose threat to the country's economy while it can be true but there no justification or prove provided to support this claim, it might be possible that the illegal immigrant's main motive to entering one country is a stable life and a job in such case these illigal immigrants will contribute to the economy of the country and not the other way around.
Because the argument makes sevral unwarranted assumptions, it fails to make convencing case that if illegal immigrants entering the country are not checked, they will pose threats to country's economy and national identity and hence every effort must be made to return these illegal immigrants back to their origin country.
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Essay evaluation report
Sentence: The following argument is flawed for numerous reasons. primarily, the argument is based is based on the unwarrented assumption that the increasing number of illegal immigrants are the only threat to countrys' economy and national identity and returning them to there country of origin is only solution.
Error: unwarrented Suggestion: unwanted
Sentence: The argument fails to provide any justification that sending illegal immigrants back to their country will help a country to preserve their national idendentity.
Error: idendentity Suggestion: identity
Sentence: Even if the argument had provided such prove or data, there are many other unanswered questions that argument leaves, for example the argument states that illegal immigrants prose threat to the country's economy while it can be true but there no justification or prove provided to support this claim, it might be possible that the illegal immigrant's main motive to entering one country is a stable life and a job in such case these illigal immigrants will contribute to the economy of the country
Error: illigal Suggestion: illegal
Sentence: Because the argument makes sevral unwarranted assumptions, it fails to make convencing case that if illegal immigrants entering the country are not checked, they will pose threats to country's economy and national identity and hence every effort must be made to return these illegal immigrants back to their origin country.
Error: sevral Suggestion: several
Error: unwarranted Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: convencing Suggestion: convening
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 2.0 out of 6
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 6 15
No. of Words: 252 350
No. of Characters: 1304 1500
No. of Different Words: 114 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.984 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.175 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.644 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 101 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 84 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 55 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 29 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 42 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 24.062 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.546 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.797 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.163 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 56, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Primarily
...rgument is flawed for numerous reasons. primarily, the argument is based is based on the ...
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Line 1, column 80, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'is based'.
Suggestion: is based
...merous reasons. primarily, the argument is based is based on the unwarrented assumption that the ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 170, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Had
...o the national identity of the country. had the argument provide some prove and dat...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.6327345309 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.9520958084 54% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 11.1786427146 98% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 13.6137724551 51% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 28.8173652695 62% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 55.5748502994 41% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 12.0 16.3942115768 73% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1328.0 2260.96107784 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 252.0 441.139720559 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26984126984 5.12650576532 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.56307096286 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66400802842 2.78398813304 96% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 204.123752495 56% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.452380952381 0.468620217663 97% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 705.55239521 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.76447105788 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.22255489022 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 19.7664670659 35% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 22.8473053892 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 147.909652512 57.8364921388 256% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 189.714285714 119.503703932 159% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.0 23.324526521 154% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 5.70786347227 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.25449101796 57% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.20758483034 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 6.88822355289 102% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.218282227539 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0743258471296 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0701772020484 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.128457276422 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0628817314937 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.4 14.3799401198 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.48 48.3550499002 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.1628742515 156% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 12.197005988 152% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.88 12.5979740519 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.32208582834 102% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 98.500998004 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 12.3882235529 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 11.1389221557 147% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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