The best leaders are those who encourage feedback from the people whom they lead.
a leader is long been seen haughty and superior who dont believe in making everybody work for them. while noble and lofty this view has little bearing on reality- today a true and successful leader is one who works togther with the team and make every team member a part of the team.
therefore,a true leader is one who lead by example and beliefs in that nothing can beat team work, one who encourage feedback from the people they lead.
often we think that a leader or a boss is one who who just gives orders and enjoys the result but this fact has little bearing on reality- a true leader is one leads by example, who just not only makes plans and gives orders to prople whom they lead but also equally work together with the team for the achievement of the goal, one who takes feedback from all the team members and make sure to work on all the feedbacks which ultimately result in a more united and paassionate team in which every team member feels contributing equally to team.
sometimes pleasing every one in the team can also cause problems and hence a leader should also be able to make strict decisions for the success of the team and reject those feedbacks which contribute negligible ammount in achievement of goals.
while everyone today thinks a leader should be the one who only gives orders and make plans. a true leader is one makes every team member feel that they are equally part of the team by always listening and working feedbacks given by any team members.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, so, therefore, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 33.0505617978 33% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 58.6224719101 46% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1217.0 2235.4752809 54% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 269.0 442.535393258 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52416356877 5.05705443957 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.55969084622 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18582934988 2.79657885939 78% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 215.323595506 58% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.46468401487 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 382.5 704.065955056 54% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 6.24550561798 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.2370786517 35% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 23.0359550562 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 144.350197755 60.3974514979 239% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 173.857142857 118.986275619 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.4285714286 23.4991977007 164% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 5.21951772744 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272036575734 0.243740707755 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152424288749 0.0831039109588 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121247668525 0.0758088955206 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190449025643 0.150359130593 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12668608138 0.0667264976115 190% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.1 14.1392134831 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.83 48.8420337079 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 12.1743820225 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.53 12.1639044944 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 100.480337079 40% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 11.2143820225 153% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.7820224719 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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