The following is a memorandum from the business manager of a television station.
"Over the past year, our late-night news program has devoted increased time to national news and less time to weather and local news. During this time period, most of the complaints received from viewers were concerned with our station's coverage of weather and local news. In addition, local businesses that used to advertise during our late-night news program have just canceled their advertising contracts with us. Therefore, in order to attract more viewers to the program and to avoid losing any further advertising revenues, we should restore the time devoted to weather and local news to its former level."
Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.
The argument over here is about the coverage of the news of the channel. he suggests that they should forecast the weather and local new more than the national news which will help them increase the trp. Because this news channel is devoting more time towards the national news instead of this and so the business manager says that most of the complaints were there during this time. he adds saying that the local business who earlier advertised their late night news program, recently cancelled all the deals with them. Due to all these he asserts that they should change their coverage. To my thinking, the points presented over here do not seem that relevant or somehow the link is missing between these points.
there are many possible reasons behind the argument over here. To start with, I would say that may be the news channel increased it's coverage of the national news as they are really something the audience wants to see. there are cahnces that the complaints which were recieved during yhis period might be of some other reason. may be the manager is involved with the competitor and they might be faking it to decrease the popularity of the channel. it might be even possible that they might have gathered a wrong data and prediced wrong. so, the confusion might have occured. even some of he criics migh-have prank called so that the company might change what it is forecasting right now.
To put in a nutshell i would say that, proper data should be collected, reviews of the viewes should be taken in order to ghet the correcy idea of ik. And any desicion should be taken only after a deep study of it.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 2.0 out of 6
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 9 15
No. of Words: 288 350
No. of Characters: 1311 1500
No. of Different Words: 150 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.12 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.552 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.169 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 83 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 62 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 40 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 13 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 32 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 23.954 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.333 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.384 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.597 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.182 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 26, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
The argument over here is about the coverage of the news of the ch...
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Suggestion: He
...he coverage of the news of the channel. he suggests that they should forecast the ...
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Suggestion: He
...complaints were there during this time. he adds saying that the local business who...
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Suggestion: There
...s missing between these points. there are many possible reasons behind the ar...
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Suggestion: There
...ly something the audience wants to see. there are cahnces that the complaints which w...
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...s period might be of some other reason. may be the manager is involved with the com...
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Suggestion: It
...decrease the popularity of the channel. it might be even possible that they might ...
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Suggestion: So
...thered a wrong data and prediced wrong. so, the confusion might have occured. even...
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Suggestion: Even
.... so, the confusion might have occured. even some of he criics migh-have prank calle...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...right now. To put in a nutshell i would say that, proper data should be c...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...f the viewes should be taken in order to ghet the correcy idea of ik. And any des...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
may, really, so, even so, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.6327345309 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.9520958084 124% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 11.1786427146 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 13.6137724551 95% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 28.8173652695 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 55.5748502994 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 16.3942115768 18% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1349.0 2260.96107784 60% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 288.0 441.139720559 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68402777778 5.12650576532 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.56307096286 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20144091684 2.78398813304 79% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 204.123752495 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545138888889 0.468620217663 116% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 705.55239521 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59920159681 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 19.7664670659 76% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 22.8473053892 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.4266689212 57.8364921388 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.9333333333 119.503703932 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 23.324526521 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.6 5.70786347227 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 5.15768463074 58% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.25449101796 209% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.20758483034 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 6.88822355289 102% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.67664670659 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226386914035 0.218282227539 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0704360052873 0.0743258471296 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112682685898 0.0701772020484 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136601124431 0.128457276422 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.144845856015 0.0628817314937 230% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 14.3799401198 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 48.3550499002 143% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 12.197005988 68% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.5979740519 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.32208582834 88% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 98.500998004 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 12.3882235529 73% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.1389221557 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.9071856287 84% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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