The following is part of a memorandum from the president of Humana University.
"Last year the number of students who enrolled in online degree programs offered by nearby Omni University increased by 50 percent. During the same year, Omni showed a significant decrease from prior years in expenditures for dormitory and classroom space, most likely because online instruction takes place via the Internet. In contrast, over the past three years, enrollment at Humana University has failed to grow and the cost of maintaining buildings has increased. Thus, to increase enrollment and solve the problem of budget deficits at Humana University, we should initiate and actively promote online degree programs like those at Omni."
Write a response in which you examine the stated and/or unstated assumptions of the argument. Be sure to explain how the argument depends on these assumptions and what the implications are for the argument if the assumptions prove unwarranted.
humana university is seeking to start a online degree program to increase the intake As statistic given by author shown there enrollment at humana university has failed to grow from last three years and in turn they need to make some changes.
but according to author omni university intake is increased by 50% but its not clearing showing that actual number of students get increased from when the online program is started. if total number of intake is very less number in last year then 50% can increase only small number of students. hence there might not be chance to increase intake based on starting of online program.
The statistic given by author is only for one university and assuming that same will happen for humana university. but this assumption can fail if location, rank or any other offering given by omni university may increase their intake hence study should be done on more university with same rank or same rated by some other regulatory bodies for taking decision.
Furthermore, regariding expenditure incurred for dormitory and classroom space is reduced only because omni university started online program is weak argument. there could be other possibilities or processes carried out in campus of omni university which help to low expenditure.
In conclusion we can state that to make low expenditure on dormitory and classroom we cant rely only on starting online program but more study need to be conducted for same.
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Comments
e-rater score report
No. of Words: 240 350
Minimum 250 words wanted
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 5 2
No. of Sentences: 5 15
No. of Words: 240 350
No. of Characters: 1189 1500
No. of Different Words: 125 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.936 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.954 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.56 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 87 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 58 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 45 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 30 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 48 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 13.282 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.8 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.558 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 1 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.218 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Humana
humana university is seeking to start a online...
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Line 1, column 39, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
humana university is seeking to start a online degree program to increase the i...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...urn they need to make some changes. but according to author omni university int...
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Line 3, column 183, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...rom when the online program is started. if total number of intake is very less num...
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Line 3, column 295, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hence
...increase only small number of students. hence there might not be chance to increase i...
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Line 3, column 295, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: hence,
...increase only small number of students. hence there might not be chance to increase i...
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Line 5, column 116, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...same will happen for humana university. but this assumption can fail if location, r...
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Line 7, column 119, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... is reduced only because omni university started online program is weak argument....
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Line 7, column 162, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
...tarted online program is weak argument. there could be other possibilities or process...
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Line 9, column 87, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...penditure on dormitory and classroom we cant rely only on starting online program bu...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, if, may, so, then, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.6327345309 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.9520958084 77% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 11.1786427146 98% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 13.6137724551 37% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 28.8173652695 31% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 55.5748502994 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 16.3942115768 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1218.0 2260.96107784 54% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 240.0 441.139720559 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.075 5.12650576532 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.56307096286 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61564470489 2.78398813304 94% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 204.123752495 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5375 0.468620217663 115% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 705.55239521 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.96107784431 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.76447105788 11% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 19.7664670659 46% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.8473053892 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.1869192907 57.8364921388 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.333333333 119.503703932 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6666666667 23.324526521 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 5.70786347227 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.25449101796 190% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.20758483034 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.88822355289 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.368762390676 0.218282227539 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.158271226873 0.0743258471296 213% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0869187136555 0.0701772020484 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200487417091 0.128457276422 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0974187765972 0.0628817314937 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 14.3799401198 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 48.3550499002 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 12.197005988 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.5979740519 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.32208582834 97% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 98.500998004 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 12.3882235529 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.1389221557 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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