Less people under 10 either means an end to a baby boom or the start of a super burst according to demographic statistics. Either is true will cause at least a decade of low children percentile in general population.
Opening a café is synchronizing with Regal books while giving up Monarch’s one shop for all books advantage.
Regal may have other established advantages, such as secret coffee recipe, special sourcing from Ethiopia, or a good loyalty program.
Monarch books and Regal books are not well-defined, possible duopoly of this nation, or just 2 corner bookshop too small, too poor to be so close to each other—Only one can survive.
If Monarch and Regal are enjoying a duopoly, Monarch can’t give up any edge to this head to head competition.
As some share holder, or just a executive employee at Monarch, the board of directors can’t be stupid, and the recommendations can’t be ignored.
A very tricky information is 20-years, in demographic terms, it is a generation. From the information we have, I can guess with confidence, this nation is enduring an echo burst, population is going downhill. Nature growth is possibly negative, children won’t lead to new growth in sales.
This is a skeleton means to generate more discords.
- Twenty years ago, Dr. Field, a noted anthropologist, visited the island of Tertia. Using an observation-centered approach to studying Tertian culture, he concluded from his observations that children in Tertia were reared by an entire village rather than 66
- In oder to learn a language well, we should also learn about the country as well as the cultures and lifestyles of the people who speak this language. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion. 56
- The following appeared in a memorandum from the owner of Movies Galore, a chain of movie-rental stores."In order to stop the recent decline in our profits, we must reduce operating expenses at Movies Galore's ten movie-rental store 63
- The following is a recommendation from the Board of Directors of Monarch Books. We recommend that Monarch Books open a café in its store. Monarch, having been in business at the same location for more than twenty years, has a large customer base because 33
- There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays? 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun people is countable.
Suggestion: Fewer
Less people under 10 either means an end to ...
^^^^
Line 4, column 103, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'bookshop' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'bookshops'.
Suggestion: bookshops
...uopoly of this nation, or just 2 corner bookshop too small, too poor to be so close to e...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 90, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: head-to-head
...rch can't give up any edge to this head to head competition. As some share holder, or...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 31, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...tition. As some share holder, or just a executive employee at Monarch, the boar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, well, while, at least, in general, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.6327345309 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.9520958084 54% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 11.1786427146 63% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 13.6137724551 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 28.8173652695 24% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 55.5748502994 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 16.3942115768 43% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1071.0 2260.96107784 47% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 209.0 441.139720559 47% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12440191388 5.12650576532 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 4.56307096286 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07739948377 2.78398813304 111% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 204.123752495 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.66985645933 0.468620217663 143% => OK
syllable_count: 330.3 705.55239521 47% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.76447105788 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.67365269461 239% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 19.7664670659 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 22.8473053892 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.9296814275 57.8364921388 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.3636363636 119.503703932 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 23.324526521 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.70786347227 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 5.15768463074 155% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.25449101796 76% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.20758483034 85% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 6.88822355289 44% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206056566397 0.218282227539 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669408281746 0.0743258471296 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059083821513 0.0701772020484 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0860710058511 0.128457276422 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0571593051635 0.0628817314937 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 14.3799401198 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.3550499002 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.197005988 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.5979740519 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.32208582834 107% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 98.500998004 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 12.3882235529 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.1389221557 86% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.