The president and administrative staff at Grove College propose that, it should preserve its proprietary all-female policy as opposed to coeducation. However, the argument provided against the same consists of some seriously unwarranted assumptions which raise some questions which if not answered could jeopardize the validity of the argument. Hence, before evaluating the argument the following three questions need to be answered.
First of all, why is it that the survey of students and alumnae given more credibility as compared to the survey of the faculty? It might be the case that, the faculty having taught for several years have seen the situation more closely and they might be the better judge in this situation. It is true that the students belong to the students and they should be involved in the decision making, but that does not mean that the faculty has no say. No answer is provided for this question in the argument.
Secondly, What percentage of students participated in the survey? It might be the case that out of a total of 5,000 students only 100 students responded to the survey which would mean that only 80 students align with the conclusion. However, this number is insignificant against the total strength of college.
Lastly, On what basis the author avers that keeping the college all-female improve the morale among students? Not making the college coeducation might not make the students ready for the real world. The students might face problems working with other male colleagues because of their zero exposure to males.
In conclusion, the argument as it stands now is flawed and the author needs to answer the above-mentioned questions before his argument could be formally assessed.
- The following recommendation was made by the president and administrative staff of Grove College a private institution to the college s governing committee
- A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college 50
- A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college
- The following recommendation was made by the president and administrative staff of Grove College a private institution to the college s governing committee We recommend that Grove College preserve its century old tradition of all female education rather t 50
- The following recommendation was made by the president and administrative staff of Grove College a private institution to the college s governing committee 53
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 283, Rule ID: IF_IS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
...ptions which raise some questions which if not answered could jeopardize the valid...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.6327345309 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.9520958084 85% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 11.1786427146 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 13.6137724551 88% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 28.8173652695 80% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 55.5748502994 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 16.3942115768 67% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1449.0 2260.96107784 64% => OK
No of words: 281.0 441.139720559 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15658362989 5.12650576532 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.56307096286 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71537478391 2.78398813304 98% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 204.123752495 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537366548043 0.468620217663 115% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 705.55239521 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.76447105788 57% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 19.7664670659 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 22.8473053892 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.895886506 57.8364921388 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.5 119.503703932 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0714285714 23.324526521 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21428571429 5.70786347227 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.25449101796 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.20758483034 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.67664670659 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100551282678 0.218282227539 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0421684216317 0.0743258471296 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0880331568726 0.0701772020484 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0577070751749 0.128457276422 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0704225791116 0.0628817314937 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 14.3799401198 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.3550499002 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.197005988 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.5979740519 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.32208582834 99% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 98.500998004 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 12.3882235529 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.1389221557 90% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 283, Rule ID: IF_IS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
...ptions which raise some questions which if not answered could jeopardize the valid...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.6327345309 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.9520958084 85% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 11.1786427146 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 13.6137724551 88% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 28.8173652695 80% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 55.5748502994 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 16.3942115768 67% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1449.0 2260.96107784 64% => OK
No of words: 281.0 441.139720559 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15658362989 5.12650576532 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.56307096286 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71537478391 2.78398813304 98% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 204.123752495 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537366548043 0.468620217663 115% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 705.55239521 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.76447105788 57% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 19.7664670659 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 22.8473053892 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.895886506 57.8364921388 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.5 119.503703932 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0714285714 23.324526521 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21428571429 5.70786347227 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.25449101796 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.20758483034 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.67664670659 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100551282678 0.218282227539 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0421684216317 0.0743258471296 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0880331568726 0.0701772020484 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0577070751749 0.128457276422 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0704225791116 0.0628817314937 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 14.3799401198 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.3550499002 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.197005988 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.5979740519 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.32208582834 99% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 98.500998004 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 12.3882235529 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.1389221557 90% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.