Green tea has long been hailed as an excellent source of antioxidants, powerful anti-aging, and immune-system boosting compounds. Many people, therefore, believe that the more cups they consume each day, the greater the benefits. Green tea, however, contains moderate amounts of caffeine, a stimulant that is not without side effects, including sleeplessness, irritability, and headaches. A long-term study has found that those who drink more than three cups of green tea a day are likely to have symptoms similar to those that chronic coffee drinkers, another source of caffeine, suffer. Therefore, it is important that anyone who chooses to drink green tea limit their intake to no more than two cups a day.
The argument is based on a few facts about green tea. First, the benefits are mentioned and later, the side effects of a high level of consumption are enumerated. The argument concludes by stating that a person shouldn't drink more than two cups of green tea a day in order to avoid the side effects of its constituents. The argument mentions that the green tea has moderate amounts of caffeine which is quite harmful to the human body and if a large amount of green tea is being consumed on a regular basis, it would show the same side effects as of a chronic coffee drinker. The argument quite subtlely ignores a number of important factors which should be considered before coming to a conclusion such as what is the exact amount caffeine present in green tea or what amount of team powder do people generally mix in the water?
Green tea has been proven to benefit the human body in numerous ways and is undoubtedly salubrious for all of us. However, it also has moderate amounts of caffeine which stimulates sleeplessness, irritability and headaches if consumed in large amounts. Chronic coffee drinkers face this problem on a regular basis and it is directly associated with the amount of caffeine present in it. There could be other constituent materials of coffee which induce sleeplessness and irritability. A detailed study on whether caffeine is the sole reason for such a happening is required to strengthen the argument. As of now, caffeine being the common ingredient between coffee and green tea is fallaciously regarded as the reason for sleeplessness and irritability.
Further, what percentage of caffeine is present ina standard amount of coffee and green tea should be mentioned in order to reinforce the argument because, if the amount of caffeine in green tea is found to be minute, the argument will fail to stand. To conclude that a person should not drink more than 2 cups of green tea depends largely on how much green tea content he or she mixes in how much amount of water. This is absolutely subjective and will vary from person to person and in which case the argument is too absurd to even be considered.
If a person mixes a very little amount of green tea content in large amount of water which makes the solution dilute can probably drink more than 2 cups of green tea a day without any harm. In order to reinforce the argument, the criteria of exactly what amount of green tea if mixed with what amount of water causes harm should be explicitly mentioned.
In a nutshell, the argument lacks in-depth and should be filled with more pertinent facts and data in order to strengthen it. A more rigorous and diligent study about the data of the constituents of green would most likely make the argument firm and credible.
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Comments
Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 18 15
No. of Words: 481 350
No. of Characters: 2238 1500
No. of Different Words: 201 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.683 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.653 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.595 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 155 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 112 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 80 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 38 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 26.722 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.348 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.389 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.385 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.583 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.145 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 212, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: shouldn't
...ment concludes by stating that a person shouldnt drink more than two cups of green tea a...
^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 577, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...effects as of a chronic coffee drinker. The argument quite subtlely ignores a numbe...
^^^
Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... too absurd to even be considered. If a person mixes a very little amount of ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, so, then, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.6327345309 127% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.9520958084 85% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 11.1786427146 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 13.6137724551 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 28.8173652695 49% => OK
Preposition: 70.0 55.5748502994 126% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 16.3942115768 79% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2291.0 2260.96107784 101% => OK
No of words: 480.0 441.139720559 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77291666667 5.12650576532 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68069463864 4.56307096286 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65445691113 2.78398813304 95% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 204.123752495 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.427083333333 0.468620217663 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 715.5 705.55239521 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 11.0 8.76447105788 126% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 19.7664670659 91% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.8473053892 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5548928036 57.8364921388 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.277777778 119.503703932 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6666666667 23.324526521 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.38888888889 5.70786347227 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.25449101796 57% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.20758483034 37% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 6.88822355289 203% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196792523878 0.218282227539 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0800290798871 0.0743258471296 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657793466859 0.0701772020484 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130866103607 0.128457276422 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0454056910907 0.0628817314937 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 14.3799401198 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 48.3550499002 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.197005988 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.5979740519 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.32208582834 99% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 98.500998004 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 12.3882235529 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.1389221557 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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