inoculations against cow flu
The argument presents a case of inoculations against cow flu, which could save many lives, but also have small
chances of killing a person; thereby making their use impermissible.
The first asssumption of the argument is that the people who might die as a result of the inoculations have
nothing in common. It is possible that some environmental factor or a pre-existing genetic condition could make
the inoculation doses lethal and lead to their death. A study on deaths due to cow flu inoculations would bring
more evidence to the table on whether the deaths are random or connected. If they are connected, the inoculations
could be given to the people not affected by the specific factor or condition. This would help save more lives
and also reduce deaths due to inculations.
It is also possible that inocultions provided very late i.e. in the later stages of cow flu, could be lethal
while those provided earlier would definitely save the patient's life. Again, a study on the deaths due to these
inoculatios would help clarify the situation.
The argument also doesn't quantize how small the probability of death due to these inoculations is. If this is an
extremely remote possibility, say 1 in 10 million, then such a risk could be undertaken to potentially save the
lives of millions of others affected by cow flu. No medical proceedure or treatment is without risk. Denying
those affected by the ailment, a chance to get proper treatment would not be prudent. On the other hand, if the
risk of death is 1 in 5, it would be best to lay off the treatment and look for safer alternatives for treating
cow flu.
To conclude, the argument makes several assumptions. More studies and evidence would allow us to beter determine
if inoculations against cow flu should be routinely administered or not.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 29 15
No. of Words: 309 350
No. of Characters: 1466 1500
No. of Different Words: 162 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.193 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.744 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.804 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 94 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 72 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 54 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 35 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 10.655 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.737 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.414 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.246 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.774 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.017 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 19 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Chances
... save many lives, but also have small chances of killing a person; thereby making the...
^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Nothing
... as a result of the inoculations have nothing in common. It is possible that some env...
^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...existing genetic condition could make the inoculation doses lethal and lead to th...
^^^
Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: More
...e to cow flu inoculations would bring more evidence to the table on whether the de...
^^^^
Line 15, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Could
... they are connected, the inoculations could be given to the people not affected by ...
^^^^^
Line 17, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
...tion. This would help save more lives and also reduce deaths due to inculations. ...
^^^
Line 23, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
...er stages of cow flu, could be lethal while those provided earlier would definitely...
^^^^^
Line 23, column 56, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'patients'' or 'patient's'?
Suggestion: patients'; patient's
...vided earlier would definitely save the patients life. Again, a study on the deaths due ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 25, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Inoculatios
...n, a study on the deaths due to these inoculatios would help clarify the situation. ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 29, column 19, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...y the situation. The argument also doesnt quantize how small the probability of d...
^^^^^^
Line 29, column 100, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... of death due to these inoculations is. If this is an extremely remote possibili...
^^
Line 33, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Lives
...be undertaken to potentially save the lives of millions of others affected by cow f...
^^^^^
Line 35, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Those
...or treatment is without risk. Denying those affected by the ailment, a chance to ge...
^^^^^
Line 39, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Cow
...k for safer alternatives for treating cow flu. To conclude, the argument mak...
^^^
Line 45, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...nce would allow us to beter determine if inoculations against cow flu should be ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, so, then, while, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.6327345309 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.9520958084 108% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 11.1786427146 89% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 13.6137724551 37% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 28.8173652695 59% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 55.5748502994 65% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 16.3942115768 91% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1558.0 2260.96107784 69% => OK
No of words: 308.0 441.139720559 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05844155844 5.12650576532 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.56307096286 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85613913893 2.78398813304 103% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 204.123752495 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525974025974 0.468620217663 112% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 705.55239521 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.76447105788 103% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.70958083832 185% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 19.7664670659 76% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 22.8473053892 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7753781817 57.8364921388 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.866666667 119.503703932 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5333333333 23.324526521 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.70786347227 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 18.0 5.15768463074 349% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 5.25449101796 285% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.20758483034 61% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 6.88822355289 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.377636608513 0.218282227539 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129690001451 0.0743258471296 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.173395327414 0.0701772020484 247% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120500423178 0.128457276422 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.148347724372 0.0628817314937 236% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 14.3799401198 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.3550499002 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.197005988 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.5979740519 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.32208582834 97% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 98.500998004 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 12.3882235529 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.1389221557 90% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.9071856287 84% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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