Before adopting any kind of mixed hybrid seeds for consumption in the local population, communities should be aware of the kinds of results they will get on the feedback of the local consumers. At times, we've seen the fatal effects of hybrid evolution in mankind. Though developed for the betterment of humans and biodiversity, have left a life ling dents in the lives of millions over the past 3-4 centuries. One of the most primitive and core factors, the administrations need to inquire about is the way in which these seeds have been developed and the consequences of consumption of such seeds in excessive or any scenario, for that matter. The way in which eating such seeds along with other regular staples of the diet should also be addressed properly. On the basis of the responses the organization gets from the common people in different fields and races of life, it will help us in understanding the amount of production, the demographic distributions and the revenues that could be generated from such plantations.
The second thing that could be required for proper analysis before mass consumptions is the development of counter measures, in case of an epidemic or bad reaction from certain areas of the population on the basis of their daily work stress and food habits. There should be a proper dosage of medication that must be enough in controlling the most disastrous effect, the seed could be provide to a sample individual. The distributions and the production of such medicines should be properly taken care of to have a good backup measure, in case of any fallacy of the hybrid seeds. Even though the seeds would be good in diminishing the deficiency of Vitamin A, we should also analyze the amount of water or the farming conditions it requires to develop, so that similar actions and the steps are taken by the local government authorities in providing farming assistance and help to the local farmers. This is because in case the demands of such seeds are witnessed to a steep increase, there shouldn't be any large gap between the demand and the supply levels of the product.
The next big thing the government should understand before the availability of products in the local market is the profits it could generate on exporting such seeds in nearby cities and towns. This point might seem to be more of an 'economic' one but with only such profits can any organization have enough funds and resources in not only improving the quality of seeds but giving better subsidies to the local farmers, which indirectly will encourage them in cultivating more of these seeds on their farmlands. More the profits the government earns, higher subsidies will be provided to the farmers, and farmers would then love to produce such products which are on high demands and are going off the shelves of supermarkets in eye blinkering speeds.
The best advantage the authorities have is, millet is one of the most crucial components of the common people in that area. So the factor of encouraging populations to include them in their everyday diet is little to none. But the way, the new seeds are cooked, the way they taste will also be equal factors in determining the success of the development of the hybrid millet seed. How the seeds will be transported and sold in the open market could also be the questions for concern for us. This is because starting off these seeds at high rates would be totally ignored by the daily bread-earning families who would then look for alternatives in replenishing their requirements of Vitamin A.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: ??? out of 6
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 19 15
No. of Words: 608 350
No. of Characters: 2902 1500
No. of Different Words: 279 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.966 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.773 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.703 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 190 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 138 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 94 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 72 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 32 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 11.253 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.526 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.313 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.492 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.119 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 205, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: we've
...dback of the local consumers. At times, weve seen the fatal effects of hybrid evolut...
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Line 1, column 346, Rule ID: LING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'long'?
Suggestion: long
...mans and biodiversity, have left a life ling dents in the lives of millions over the...
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Line 3, column 742, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'developing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: developing
...r or the farming conditions it requires to develop, so that similar actions and the steps ...
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Line 3, column 992, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: shouldn't
...re witnessed to a steep increase, there shouldnt be any large gap between the demand and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, second, so, then, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 19.6327345309 153% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 25.0 12.9520958084 193% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 11.1786427146 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 13.6137724551 81% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 28.8173652695 90% => OK
Preposition: 98.0 55.5748502994 176% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 16.3942115768 110% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2950.0 2260.96107784 130% => OK
No of words: 606.0 441.139720559 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86798679868 5.12650576532 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.96155895361 4.56307096286 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74974736412 2.78398813304 99% => OK
Unique words: 282.0 204.123752495 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.465346534653 0.468620217663 99% => OK
syllable_count: 915.3 705.55239521 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.76447105788 114% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.70958083832 148% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.22255489022 118% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 19.7664670659 96% => OK
Sentence length: 31.0 22.8473053892 136% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.590810359 57.8364921388 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.263157895 119.503703932 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.8947368421 23.324526521 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.42105263158 5.70786347227 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.25449101796 76% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.20758483034 134% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.88822355289 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.67664670659 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233072608037 0.218282227539 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0716157945984 0.0743258471296 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472028668398 0.0701772020484 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150644032418 0.128457276422 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0547937772661 0.0628817314937 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 14.3799401198 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 48.3550499002 100% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.1628742515 156% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.197005988 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.56 12.5979740519 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.32208582834 106% => OK
difficult_words: 141.0 98.500998004 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 12.3882235529 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 11.1389221557 129% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.9071856287 126% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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