Many lives might be saved if inoculations against cow flu were routinely administered to all people in areas where the disease is detected. However, since there is a small possibility that a person will die as a result of the inoculations, we cannot permit inoculations against cow flu to be routinely administered.
Certain viruses have severely affected the ecosystem. Animals and poultry are the ones which are prone to these viruses and need a proper administration and look after so that the flu from the viruses are not contagious. Inoculations against the cow flu has to be routinely administered and this idea should not be hindered under any reasons.
Cow flu can kill many or put them under prolonged illness making lives miserable. This can be prevented if the inoculations against cow flu are under routine administration. Although studies say that the possibility of death as a consequence of flu is very less, it is necessary to maintain good health among animals and people so that the disease would not spread easily.
Since prevention is always better than cure, permissions for inoculations against the cow flu needs to be governed in a regular time basis. And based on the reports certain action can be taken before it's too late.
Therefore the provided evidence does not support the argument - not to permit inoculations to be routinely administration, hence for society well-being, the permissions should not delayed. Regular and routine administration and governance are to be taken care of wherever the disease is detected or very likely to be detected.
- Many lives might be saved if inoculations against cow flu were routinely administered to all people in areas where the disease is detected. However, since there is a small possibility that a person will die as a result of the inoculations, we cannot permi 33
- All too often, companies hire outside consultants to suggest ways for the company to operate more efficiently. If companies were to spend more time listening to their own employees, such consultants would be unnecessary. 33
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 129, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hich are prone to these viruses and need a proper administration and look after s...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...on can be taken before its too late. Therefore the provided evidence does not support ...
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Line 7, column 181, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'delay'
Suggestion: delay
... well-being, the permissions should not delayed. Regular and routine administration and...
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Line 7, column 328, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...detected or very likely to be detected.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, look, so, therefore, well, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.6327345309 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.9520958084 54% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 11.1786427146 89% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 13.6137724551 29% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 28.8173652695 31% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 55.5748502994 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 16.3942115768 55% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1066.0 2260.96107784 47% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 206.0 441.139720559 47% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17475728155 5.12650576532 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 4.56307096286 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98621069523 2.78398813304 107% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 204.123752495 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587378640777 0.468620217663 125% => OK
syllable_count: 347.4 705.55239521 49% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.76447105788 11% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 19.7664670659 51% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 22.8473053892 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3261027341 57.8364921388 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.6 119.503703932 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 23.324526521 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3 5.70786347227 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.25449101796 76% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.20758483034 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258407944172 0.218282227539 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10392882049 0.0743258471296 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0731194667287 0.0701772020484 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153515226291 0.128457276422 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329515241608 0.0628817314937 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 14.3799401198 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 48.3550499002 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.197005988 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.5979740519 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.32208582834 105% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 98.500998004 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 12.3882235529 73% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.1389221557 90% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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