In the argument the author posits that if Natures way opens a store in Plainsville it would make profits. This argument is supported by the fact that in this location the sales of running shoes and workout clothes are high and also the health clubs are always filled with innumerable members from the town. However the fact can be considered veracious only if the three questions are answered.
Firstly, the aerobics and gym classes always have adequate members. What if they always eat junk food and to burn the carbohydrates they are using these sessions? This would stymie the chances of people in this area visiting the store and if this is considered a possible chance then in return the sales would never be augmented.
secondly its stated that sales of apparels and footwear are high. What if the sales are from neighbourhood areas which doesn't have any shopping facilities and they visiting this town as a result of which they are high? There is a chance that they would not particularly be interested in visiting this store and this would lead to losses in that particular area.
Furthermore the population are following a healthy lifestyle. what if their energy and healthy sources are mostly related to herbals or Ayurvedic products and they are not available in these particular chain of stores. people would hesitate visiting this outlet which haphazardly decided to open a store not producing any amply amount of profits.
To conclude, the argument is flawed based on several unwarranted assumptions. If author could provide more facts and evidence to strengthen the argument then it would be fully possible to evaluate the viability of proposed recommendation.
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e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 8 2
No. of Sentences: 11 15
No. of Words: 279 350
No. of Characters: 1378 1500
No. of Different Words: 149 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.087 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.939 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.612 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 96 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 73 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 53 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 28 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 25.364 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 12.956 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.818 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.355 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.355 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.056 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 1 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 308, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...with innumerable members from the town. However the fact can be considered veracious on...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 224, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... chances of people in this area visiting the store and if this is considered a po...
^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Secondly
...n the sales would never be augmented. secondly its stated that sales of apparels and f...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 120, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...ales are from neighbourhood areas which doesnt have any shopping facilities and they v...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...ead to losses in that particular area. Furthermore the population are following a healthy ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 62, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: What
...tion are following a healthy lifestyle. what if their energy and healthy sources are...
^^^^
Line 4, column 219, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
...le in these particular chain of stores. people would hesitate visiting this outlet whi...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.6327345309 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.9520958084 69% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 11.1786427146 107% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 13.6137724551 59% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 28.8173652695 90% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 55.5748502994 49% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 16.3942115768 49% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1402.0 2260.96107784 62% => OK
No of words: 278.0 441.139720559 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04316546763 5.12650576532 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.56307096286 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66872537547 2.78398813304 96% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 204.123752495 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532374100719 0.468620217663 114% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 705.55239521 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.76447105788 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 19.7664670659 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 22.8473053892 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.3025073507 57.8364921388 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.142857143 119.503703932 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8571428571 23.324526521 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21428571429 5.70786347227 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.25449101796 133% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.20758483034 73% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.88822355289 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.67664670659 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159246935647 0.218282227539 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0536524811013 0.0743258471296 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553531047207 0.0701772020484 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0879840074225 0.128457276422 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045602806984 0.0628817314937 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 14.3799401198 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.3550499002 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.197005988 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.5979740519 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.32208582834 103% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 98.500998004 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 12.3882235529 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.1389221557 86% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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