Food not also plays a major role in the overall growth but also plays a pivotal role in the health of a human being. These days different varieties of cuisines are available all over the world and various mixed hybrid versions are also introduced. In the past people can access food materials that are available only in that particular region. In my opinion, I agree with the statement that in past people ate food that was better for their health than they do today with three reasons. To elaborate one has to go through scrupulous discussion below.
Firstly, the quality for the food materials we purchase now a days has deteriorated to a great extent. All of them available are not pure either they mix them with other types for richness in color and texture or they provide low quality products. For instance, when we consider oil made available now a days such as ground nut and sun flower refined oil they are not the result obtained from extraction of pure seeds. Along with the seeds the manufactures mix additional chemicals so that the oil looks thick and eye catchy whereas in the past people used coconut oil where coconuts were dried and directly sent to mills to get the natural form of it.
In addition, these days a lot of varieties of food are introduced. So, people are getting used to eat outside as they are getting bored with home made food. Fast foods such as noodles, pasta would show bad effect on health in long term as these recipes would require a lot of sauces and vinegar to get the taste. Many years back people used to consume sprouts and fruits as an evening snack or as substitute whenever they are hungry but now they are replaced with ice creams and chocolates which are filled with fat and artificial sugar contents leading to negative results.
Furthermore, in the past local people have to harvest the food required for every season and would save and consume them throughout the year. These days because of loss in the richness of soil farmers are using powerful pesticides to make them grow faster and earn enumerate profits. Consuming these chemicals has developed mutations in DNA for a myriad number of people leading to distinct types of cancer whereas in the past every single individual is healthy maintaining their average rate of age as 80 which is not the case these days.
To conclude, many will argue that food is lot better and healthy these days. Quantity never implies quality. They both are different aspects altogether. Although abundant food is available to every person the prominence it used to have has become extinct. That is the reason even though there were no hospitals earlier people used to have longer life span than they are today.
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Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... both are different aspects altogether. Although abundant food is available to every per...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, so, whereas, as to, for instance, in addition, such as, in my opinion, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2232.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 472.0 407.700716846 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72881355932 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6610686524 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35638942033 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 250.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529661016949 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 711.9 618.680645161 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.7086637651 48.9658058833 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.285714286 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4761904762 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 5.45110844103 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.375931352647 0.236089414692 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0999138693145 0.076458572812 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128196198839 0.0737576698707 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19975373683 0.150856017488 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102722434025 0.0645574589148 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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