Our governor ,Mr. Gluttonberg is the best candidate and deserves to be re-elected.
Passage concludes or proposes that Our governor ,Mr. Gluttonberg is the best candidate and deserves to be re-elected.In order to support this conclusion author has come up with certain evidences.However on a deeper scrutiny it is revealed that none of the evidences land credible support to the conclusion.Let us scrutinize them further
Firstly,author said that during his tenure of three years there has been a marked increase in the number of people employed,besides an influx of migrants from other states author unfairly generalize that it may be possible that due to influx only migrants have got more job then the citizens of the country.There are no statestical analysis of three years of tenure of the governence to proof that the governor increased the employment.
Secondly,author asserts that crime rate too has steadily declined author must have forgotten that their is no proof like analysis or chart which compares the crime rate of particular year with each other.
Thirdly,author conveys that there are indications that we will witness similar trends in the future too Mr.Gluttonberg has affirmed that he has undertaken measures to keep the large-scale industries here author does not paid attention to the fact that its not neccesary that from the similar trends in the future too people will make Mr.Gluttonberg the best candidate ,it may be possible that citizens may be benefitted more by another trend which is out of the box.
After having seen the above discussion ,we come to know that the proposal has not been substantiated by the evidences provided by the author.The evidences hold inherent weakness.Thus,author must bring more data into consideration to make such conclusion.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 5 15
No. of Words: 285 350
No. of Characters: 1409 1500
No. of Different Words: 158 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.109 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.944 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.6 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 101 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 76 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 60 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 32 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 57 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 18.122 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 1 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.523 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 1 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.2 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
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... concludes or proposes that Our governor ,Mr. Gluttonberg is the best candidate an...
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...candidate and deserves to be re-elected.In order to support this conclusion author...
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Suggestion: However
...thor has come up with certain evidences.However on a deeper scrutiny it is revealed tha...
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...land credible support to the conclusion.Let us scrutinize them further Firstly,auth...
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...n.Let us scrutinize them further Firstly,author said that during his tenure of three ye...
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Suggestion: , besides
...ncrease in the number of people employed,besides an influx of migrants from other states...
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Message: Did you mean 'than'?
Suggestion: than
... influx only migrants have got more job then the citizens of the country.There are n...
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...re job then the citizens of the country.There are no statestical analysis of three ye...
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...ernor increased the employment. Secondly,author asserts that crime rate too has steadil...
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Message: Did you mean 'there'?
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...eclined author must have forgotten that their is no proof like analysis or chart whic...
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...particular year with each other. Thirdly,author conveys that there are indications that...
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...ess similar trends in the future too Mr.Gluttonberg has affirmed that he has undertaken mea...
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Suggestion: pay
...e-scale industries here author does not paid attention to the fact that its not necc...
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Message: Did you mean 'to people'?
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...l make Mr.Gluttonberg the best candidate ,it may be possible that citizens may be ...
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.... After having seen the above discussion ,we come to know that the proposal has no...
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...or.The evidences hold inherent weakness.Thus,author must bring more data into consid...
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Suggestion: , author
...he evidences hold inherent weakness.Thus,author must bring more data into consideration...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, however, may, second, secondly, then, third, thirdly, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.6327345309 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.9520958084 54% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 11.1786427146 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 17.0 13.6137724551 125% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 28.8173652695 97% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 55.5748502994 68% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 16.3942115768 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 2260.96107784 63% => OK
No of words: 272.0 441.139720559 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25367647059 5.12650576532 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.56307096286 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23099438546 2.78398813304 116% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 204.123752495 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580882352941 0.468620217663 124% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 705.55239521 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.76447105788 11% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 19.7664670659 20% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 68.0 22.8473053892 298% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 224.089686287 57.8364921388 387% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 357.25 119.503703932 299% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 68.0 23.324526521 292% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 20.75 5.70786347227 364% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 5.15768463074 19% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 20.0 5.25449101796 381% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.20758483034 24% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 6.88822355289 15% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231358124352 0.218282227539 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108704784976 0.0743258471296 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11345807897 0.0701772020484 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231358124352 0.128457276422 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0628817314937 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 37.3 14.3799401198 259% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 2.46 48.3550499002 5% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.1628742515 222% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 29.8 12.197005988 244% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.35 12.5979740519 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.9 8.32208582834 131% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 98.500998004 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 57.0 12.3882235529 460% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 29.2 11.1389221557 262% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 11.9071856287 252% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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