"Over the past two years, the number of shoppers in Central Plaza has been steadily decreasing while the popularity of skateboarding has increased dramatically. Many Central Plaza store owners believe that the decrease in their business is due to the number of skateboard users in the plaza. There has also been a dramatic increase in the amount of litter and vandalism throughout the plaza. Thus, we recommend that the city prohibit skateboarding in Central Plaza. If skateboarding is prohibited here, we predict that business in Central Plaza will return to its previously high levels."
The article mainly concerned about the skateboarders in Central Plaza that were assumed to be the cause of the decreasing number of shoppers. While it may be true, the arguments does not convincingly persuade the readers that the skateboarders are the real culprit of the declining visitors.
According to the argument, the number of shoppers has been decreasing while the number of skateboarders has been increasing. It sounds very vague since the article did not mention where the claim came from. None of the sentence explained whether the claim was coming from a trusted survey organization or from one of the shop owners' opinion. The number of the decreasing shoppers could be due to bad economic situation that prevented people from shopping. Or it could be due to the opening of the newer shopping place that offered a better price and attracted most of Central Plaza's customers.
The decreasing number of customers definitely affected the income of the Plaza itself. Less income meant less manpower that the Plaza could afford. The manpower who dealt with security and cleanliness would be lesser in terms of number, thus creating an impression of a not properly maintained place, such as increased number of littering and vandalism.
By prohibiting the skateboarders, it would not guarantee that the number of shoppers would increase. The plaza needs more evidence, such as several pictures or recordings of skateboarders littering and vandalizing, to ensure that the skateboarders are the real culprit. If the evidence could not be found, Central Plaza need to be more rational when finding the real cause of the declining customers.
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- A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college. 50
- Nations should pass laws to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in their natural state, even if these areas could be developed for economic gain. 16
- Of the two leading real estate firms in our town—Adams Realty and Fitch Realty—Adams Realty is clearly superior. Adams has 40 real estate agents; in contrast, Fitch has 25, many of whom work only part-time. Moreover, Adams' revenue last year was twice 66
- Teacher's salary should be based on student's performance 50
Discourse Markers used:
['if', 'may', 'so', 'thus', 'while', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.250871080139 0.25644967241 98% => OK
Verbs: 0.177700348432 0.15541462614 114% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0696864111498 0.0836205057962 83% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0418118466899 0.0520304965353 80% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0174216027875 0.0272364105082 64% => OK
Prepositions: 0.132404181185 0.125424944231 106% => OK
Participles: 0.0696864111498 0.0416121511921 167% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.87809148467 2.79052419416 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0209059233449 0.026700313972 78% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.001811407834 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.132404181185 0.113004496875 117% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0313588850174 0.0255425247493 123% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0209059233449 0.0127820249294 164% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1649.0 2731.13054187 60% => OK
No of words: 266.0 446.07635468 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.1992481203 6.12365571057 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.57801047555 88% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.375939849624 0.378187486979 99% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.296992481203 0.287650121315 103% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.229323308271 0.208842608468 110% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.161654135338 0.135150697306 120% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87809148467 2.79052419416 103% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 207.018472906 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515037593985 0.469332199767 110% => OK
Word variations: 49.7247547542 52.1807786196 95% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 20.039408867 65% => OK
Sentence length: 20.4615384615 23.2022227129 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9847241775 57.7814097925 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.846153846 141.986410481 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4615384615 23.2022227129 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.461538461538 0.724660767414 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.14285714286 78% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.58251231527 0% => OK
Readability: 50.1607865818 51.9672348444 97% => OK
Elegance: 1.91176470588 1.8405768891 104% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.576182944195 0.441005458295 131% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.178307865714 0.135418324435 132% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.067978095633 0.0829849096947 82% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.670438665127 0.58762219726 114% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.121473885437 0.147661913831 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.311662291918 0.193483328276 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111563854402 0.0970749176394 115% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.517630572605 0.42659136922 121% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0797373289267 0.0774707102158 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.446271029962 0.312017818177 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0612326254201 0.0698173142475 88% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.33743842365 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.87684729064 58% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.82512315271 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 6.46551724138 93% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 5.36822660099 75% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.82389162562 35% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 14.657635468 75% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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More content wanted. For issue essays, around 450 words, for argument essays, around 400 words.
Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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