"Over the past two years, the number of shoppers in Central Plaza has been steadily decreasing while the popularity of skateboarding has increased dramatically. Many Central Plaza store owners believe that the decrease in their business is due to the number of skateboard users in the plaza. There has also been a dramatic increase in the amount of litter and vandalism throughout the plaza. Thus, we recommend that the city prohibit skateboarding in Central Plaza. If skateboarding is prohibited here, we predict that business in Central Plaza will return to its previously high levels."
Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered in order to decide whether the recommendation is likely to have the predicted result. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the recommendation
It is given that if the skateboarding is prohibited in central plaza, the business will return to its previosuly high levels. But there are many questions that are needed to be answered for the business in the plaza. It is possible that over the past two years, the plaza for example is not selling the latest fashion, not serving the latest cuisines or not showing the latest hit movies. For the plaza to increase their business, they must be following the latest trends so as to meet the people's needs.It is also possible the plaza store owners are grossly overpricing their items.
In this world of online shopping, people have many options and they will go for the more profitable one. Customers at the swipe of their smartphones now can see different options in different apps and compare the pricing. In case of latest fashion,it is very difficult for the plaza owners to be competitive with the online retail stores as the latter are backed up by venture captialists, and the former are small businessmen. To increase their profitabilty, they must have regular sales,sell superior quality goods,bring in the latest fashion and have a different variety of clothes in tune with the latest fashion. Even though there are many apps for clothes,people prefer to buy good fitting clothes which they can only acquire when they go to a store. So if they satisfy the customer, they can increase their business. Also in order to compete with local stores, they must have competitive prices.
It must not be too less as the store owners would incur losses and it must not be too high or people would prefer to go to the local stores. In case of restaurants in the plaza, as in the case of clothes, there are several delivery food apps with which people can order food to their houses by which they can et restaurant quality food without stepping out of thei houses.In order to get profit, the restaurant can improve the ambients, because inspite of many food apps, many crave for the fine dining experience after a long day of work and a good restaurant is a good place to go.
The restaurant owners must serve the latest cusine with alot of varieties at affordable prices. And in the case of movie theatre,the plaza must show the movies according to the audience it is targetting. For example, if the neighbourhood is a family place, famly oriented movies must be shown and if it has college going studets, genres watched by them must be shown. For example, in case of college going students, they come to the movies to chill out after a hard day's work at the university.If the theatre shows some serious foreign movies which they might not even understand, they will never come to the theatres.
In the world of netflix and HBO, in order to be still relevant to the people, they must show good movies,sell good food like popcorn at affordable prices.The store owners think that the skateboarding is decreasing their business. But on the contrary, as the game is becoming very popular, the skateboard can be used to increase their business by giving publicity to their plaza.If these measures are taken, they can increase thei revenue.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, as to, for example, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.6327345309 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 24.0 12.9520958084 185% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 11.1786427146 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 13.6137724551 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 28.8173652695 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 73.0 55.5748502994 131% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 16.3942115768 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2585.0 2260.96107784 114% => OK
No of words: 542.0 441.139720559 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76937269373 5.12650576532 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82502781895 4.56307096286 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56436392447 2.78398813304 92% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 204.123752495 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.442804428044 0.468620217663 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 806.4 705.55239521 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 4.96107784431 262% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 8.76447105788 80% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.70958083832 258% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.67365269461 239% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.22255489022 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 19.7664670659 86% => OK
Sentence length: 31.0 22.8473053892 136% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 107.840007085 57.8364921388 186% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.058823529 119.503703932 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.8823529412 23.324526521 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.58823529412 5.70786347227 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 5.15768463074 19% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 5.25449101796 324% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.20758483034 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 6.88822355289 44% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.67664670659 128% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175536173703 0.218282227539 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700508348918 0.0743258471296 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566952756592 0.0701772020484 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175536173703 0.128457276422 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0628817314937 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 14.3799401198 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 48.3550499002 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.197005988 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.98 12.5979740519 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.32208582834 102% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 98.500998004 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 12.3882235529 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 11.1389221557 129% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.9071856287 118% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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