A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
I donot agree with the statement which says that a nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum.They are a wide varitey of students and each student's education should be tailored to one's needs. For example, students who are physically and mentally challenged take different times to learn.So, in order to take care of that, they should have the curriculum which matches their own pace. Also, such children need developmental activities like painting, and special games which are intended to activate their minds.Thus, their curriculum must include all the other activities which might not be required for normal students.
Similarly, in the case for gifted children, they learn faster than the average students. A curriculum designed for an average student to complete in one year, they might complete it in six months only after which they will suffer from for the next six months. The curriculum set for them must be challenging enough,so that they are fully engaged for the whole year.
In the same way, the "average" students themselves are of may types.Some like sports, some music, drama etc. Some students might decide that they would become sport stars or movie actors at a young age. So, for them curriculums emphasized on sports and drama respectively must be established. For example, in a sportsman's curriculum, along with rigourous training in sports,there should be subjects like the science of sports,health and fitness should be concentrated upon and the other subjects like history,geography,languages etc. can have less emphasis. It must be remembered that every child is special, and the curriculum must be made in such a way that each and every child can learn to the fullest which is the main aim of curriculum.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, similarly, so, thus, for example, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.4196629213 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 58.6224719101 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1494.0 2235.4752809 67% => OK
No of words: 288.0 442.535393258 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1875 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.55969084622 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12583322225 2.79657885939 112% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 215.323595506 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559027777778 0.4932671777 113% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 704.065955056 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.4653717761 60.3974514979 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.5 118.986275619 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 23.4991977007 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 5.21951772744 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269698990144 0.243740707755 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0977668307715 0.0831039109588 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127622982048 0.0758088955206 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185490842912 0.150359130593 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11287701973 0.0667264976115 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 14.1392134831 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.1639044944 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 100.480337079 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 11.8971910112 164% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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