Over the past two years, the number of shoppers in Central Plaza has been steadily decreasing while the popularity of skateboarding has increased dramatically. Many Central Plaza store owners believe that the decrease in their business is due to the number of skateboard users in the plaza. There has also been a dramatic increase in the amount of litter and vandalism throughout the plaza. Thus, we recommend that the city prohibit skateboarding in Central Plaza. If skateboarding is prohibited here, we predict that business in Central Plaza will return to its previously high levels.
The following argument has numerous flaws. Author here is beating around the bush rather than sticking on one single issue: business in central plaza is degrading. this argument has many unwarranted assumptions that decreasing in business of shoppes in Central Plaza is due to increase in number of skateboard riders which they tend to ban in the plaza.
Firstly, the witter assumes that falling off the bossiness in Central Plaza is due to increase in use of skateboards. This is just an assumption, as in argument there is no-where mentioned that, downfall in the business is because of the use of skateboard. Any bushiness mainly depends on type of material stock you have in a shop, for example the shops if one shop say of clothing! if the shop docent have stock according to new trends and fashion no one will visit the shop rather they will pass on. On other hand author the argument states that there is increase in number of skateboard hence it proofs that the Central Plaza is not deficient of victors. If the argument have provided some strong evidence like " on survey " or " on resent public opinion" etc. would strengthen the argument .
Secondly, The argument also put lights on littering and vandalizing. Central Plaza may be one of the shopping center in neighborhood ad many people must be visiting the mall for shopping or to hang out. In the argument there is no such strong evedance that skateboarders are litterer or vandalizing the floor or plaza premises there must some mischievous people who has nothing work to dos rather than littering and wandering around. Furthermore increase in skateboard doesn’t mean that all people vim board vesting the plaza are using such board to Rome around. since it is a shopping area there must be food stalls where people eat, drink and litter, May be business must be reduced as patrons may not like to visit the place because of such mischievous people around . Yes! if the argument had some of supporting evidence which proves the guilt of skateboard then it would be considered
Finally, the argument assumes that business will return to its previously high levels that were reached two years ago. One could easily imagine that the economic situation today is not identical to the state of the economy two years ago. With the fluctuations in unemployment rate, job security, and international trade, the store owners cannot expect the sales today to be at the same levels as they were previously. In fact, it is quite possible that tax laws have changed to incentive citizens to shop less and to save more. Had the argument provided proof that the economy was exactly in the same condition as it was two years ago, it would strengthen the argument.
Because the argument relies on several unwarranted assumptions, it fails to make a convincing case that prohibiting skateboarding in Central Plaza would increase business in Central Plaza to its previously high levels. For the aforementioned reasons, the argument is unlikely to persuade the city to prohibit skateboarding in Central Plaza.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 4.0 out of 6
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 19 15
No. of Words: 514 350
No. of Characters: 2490 1500
No. of Different Words: 244 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.761 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.844 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.636 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 176 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 133 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 98 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 48 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 27.053 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 13.26 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.526 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.338 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.545 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.106 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 165, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...business in central plaza is degrading. this argument has many unwarranted assumptio...
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Line 5, column 384, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
... the shops if one shop say of clothing! if the shop docent have stock according to...
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Line 5, column 814, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...apos; etc. would strengthen the argument . Secondly, The argument also put li...
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Line 9, column 435, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...er than littering and wandering around. Furthermore increase in skateboard doesn't mea...
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Line 9, column 569, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Since
...za are using such board to Rome around. since it is a shopping area there must be foo...
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Line 9, column 775, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ecause of such mischievous people around . Yes! if the argument had some of suppor...
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Line 9, column 783, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...f such mischievous people around . Yes! if the argument had some of supporting evi...
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Line 9, column 783, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “if” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...f such mischievous people around . Yes! if the argument had some of supporting evi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, for example, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.6327345309 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.9520958084 124% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 11.1786427146 89% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 13.6137724551 132% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 28.8173652695 97% => OK
Preposition: 73.0 55.5748502994 131% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 16.3942115768 128% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2585.0 2260.96107784 114% => OK
No of words: 516.0 441.139720559 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00968992248 5.12650576532 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.76609204519 4.56307096286 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71845656798 2.78398813304 98% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 204.123752495 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.472868217054 0.468620217663 101% => OK
syllable_count: 806.4 705.55239521 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.76447105788 68% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.70958083832 221% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.22255489022 166% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 19.7664670659 106% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.8473053892 105% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.9666110989 57.8364921388 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.095238095 119.503703932 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5714285714 23.324526521 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 5.70786347227 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.25449101796 152% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.20758483034 73% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 6.88822355289 203% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232888951411 0.218282227539 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0806974639922 0.0743258471296 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0942316582813 0.0701772020484 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163526747394 0.128457276422 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0976445225384 0.0628817314937 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 14.3799401198 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.3550499002 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.197005988 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.5979740519 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.32208582834 98% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 98.500998004 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 12.3882235529 73% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.1389221557 104% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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