Over past two years, the number of shoppers in Central Plaza have steadily decreased while the populairty of skateboarding has increased dramatically.Central Plaza owners believe that the decrease in their business is due to the number of skateboard users in the plaza.There is dramatic increase in amount of litter and vandalism throughout the plaza. If skateboarding is prohibited in Central Plaza, the business in Central Plaza will return to its previously high levels.
The argument concludes that only because of the skateboarding there is decrease in number of shoppers visiting the central plaza. there are various other factors that affect the number of shoppers coming to the central plaza. The reduction in shoppers may not be only because of skateboarding. The skateboarding can be or mightbe one of the factor, but it doesn't mean that it is the only factor that caused the decrease in the number of shoppers.
there are various other factors such as some serious incident that might have spoilt the reputation of central plaza. In two years many things could've happened. The reason might not only be because of only one incident, it could be because of series of incidents. Robbery could've taken place in central plaza or some other serious incident could've taken place. If people start sensing danger in a place automatically they'll stop visiting the place.
Though the argument states that there is vandalism and increase in litter, why didn't the owners take any action to solve the problem. In the argument there is no mention of whether they took action against the one's who are responsible for the increase in litter and vandalism.
Although there is increase in litter and vandalism throughout the central plaza there is no clear evidence that skateboarding is responsible for it. The increase in litter might be due to improper cleaning. And vandalism might be done by any individual or a group who hates central plaza.
Though the argument concludes by stating that reduction in number of shoppers is because of skateboarding there is no clear evidence that supports this conclusion. there might be many reason why there is decrease in the population, which needed to be looked into.
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Comments
e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 7 2
No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 295 350
No. of Characters: 1426 1500
No. of Different Words: 117 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.144 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.834 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.568 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 103 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 75 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 50 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 22 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.071 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.654 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.286 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.371 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.644 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.124 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 131, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
...of shoppers visiting the central plaza. there are various other factors that affect t...
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Line 1, column 357, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...be or mightbe one of the factor, but it doesnt mean that it is the only factor that ca...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
... decrease in the number of shoppers. there are various other factors such as some...
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Line 3, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... in the number of shoppers. there are various other factors such as some serio...
^^
Line 3, column 79, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...as some serious incident that might have spoilt the reputation of central plaza. ...
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Line 3, column 364, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...r serious incident couldve taken place. If people start sensing danger in a place ...
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Line 3, column 420, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: they'll
...sensing danger in a place automatically theyll stop visiting the place. Though the ...
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Line 5, column 80, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...s vandalism and increase in litter, why didnt the owners take any action to solve the...
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Line 9, column 165, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
...evidence that supports this conclusion. there might be many reason why there is decre...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, may, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.6327345309 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.9520958084 62% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 11.1786427146 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 13.6137724551 88% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 28.8173652695 52% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 55.5748502994 63% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 16.3942115768 67% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1483.0 2260.96107784 66% => OK
No of words: 289.0 441.139720559 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13148788927 5.12650576532 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.56307096286 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64756762869 2.78398813304 95% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 204.123752495 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.425605536332 0.468620217663 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 450.9 705.55239521 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.96107784431 20% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.76447105788 57% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.70958083832 148% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 19.7664670659 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 22.8473053892 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.5741955799 57.8364921388 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.6875 119.503703932 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0625 23.324526521 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.9375 5.70786347227 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.25449101796 171% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.20758483034 61% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 6.88822355289 102% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.67664670659 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286895034632 0.218282227539 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105513098927 0.0743258471296 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0958691256795 0.0701772020484 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155804267929 0.128457276422 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0931248273257 0.0628817314937 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 14.3799401198 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.3550499002 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.197005988 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.5979740519 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.32208582834 90% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 98.500998004 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 12.3882235529 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.1389221557 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.9071856287 67% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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