The manager of the television station claims that they should restore their time broadcasting weather and local news that they have previously reduced in order to attract more viewers and to avoid losing advertising revenues. However, to substantiate his recommendation, he fails to provide any reliable evidence and the conclusion stands on some assumption for which they provide no clear evidence. Hence, the claim of the manager is rather weak, unconvincing, and flawed.
Firstly, the manager readily assumes that most of the complaints they received regarding their coverage of weather and local news are about the shortage of the time of the coverage. Those complaints might be concerned with the quality of their news coverage. Unless the manager provide clear evidence substantiating that the complaints were about reduced coverage time, he or she cannot make such conclusion.
Secondly, the manager also assumes that the advertising companies are cancelling their advertising contracts with them due to the reduced coverage time of weather and local news. There can be some other reason for which the advertising companies are cancelling their contracts. Perhaps, those advertising companies do not want to continue their advertising campaign for their certain products that leads them to cancel their contract with the television station.
Thirdly, The manager assumes that restoring coverage time of weather and local news would attract more viewers for which he or she provided no clear evidence.
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- A nation should require all its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college rather than allow schools in different parts of the nation to determine which academic courses to offer
- The following appeared in a letter from a homeowner to a friend Of the two leading real estate firms in our town Adams Realty and Fitch Realty Adams Realty is clearly superior Adams has 40 real estate agents in contrast Fitch has 25 many of whom w 60
e-rater score report
flaws:
No. of Words: 232 350
Minimum 250 words wanted
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
No. of Sentences: 10 15
No. of Words: 232 350
No. of Characters: 1253 1500
No. of Different Words: 109 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.903 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.401 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.684 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 93 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 83 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 50 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 30 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 23.2 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.414 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.449 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.676 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.229 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, however, regarding, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 19.6327345309 36% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.9520958084 39% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 11.1786427146 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 13.6137724551 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 28.8173652695 101% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 55.5748502994 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 16.3942115768 49% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1285.0 2260.96107784 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 232.0 441.139720559 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53879310345 5.12650576532 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.56307096286 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76676800656 2.78398813304 99% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 204.123752495 56% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491379310345 0.468620217663 105% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 705.55239521 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.76447105788 57% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 19.7664670659 51% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.8473053892 101% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1938792794 57.8364921388 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.5 119.503703932 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2 23.324526521 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 5.70786347227 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.25449101796 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.20758483034 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 6.88822355289 131% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21215792441 0.218282227539 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103960787213 0.0743258471296 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0886257227654 0.0701772020484 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156694073469 0.128457276422 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0694697452704 0.0628817314937 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 14.3799401198 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 48.3550499002 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.197005988 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 12.5979740519 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.32208582834 100% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 98.500998004 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 12.3882235529 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.1389221557 101% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.9071856287 118% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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