Over the past year, our late-night news program has devoted increasingly more time to covering national news and less time to covering weather and local news. During the same time period, most of the complaints we received from viewers were concerned with the station's coverage of weather and local news. In addition, several local businesses that used to run advertisements during our late-night news program have just cancelled their advertising contracts with us. Therefore, in order to attract more viewers to our news programs and to avoid losing any further advertising revenues, we should expand the coverage of weather and local news on all our news programs.
The argument which the author is making is not strong enough. The assumptions which author makes for supporting the argument are weak and those do not provide any strong evidence for supporting the argument.
The author says that most of the complaints received from viewers were concerned with their station's coverage of weather and local news as over the past year, their news program has devoted increased time to national news and less time to weather and local news. The author states the above assumption as a reaon to restore the time devoted to weather and local news to its former level. The author does not give an evidence of other factors which affect advertising of local businesses. The author should give an evidence that local bussinesses have canceled their advertising contracts only with their late-night news program but continuing the contracts with other late-night news programs which have devoted the less time to weather and local news.
The author should also give an evidence that the local bussinesses that have canceled the advertising contracts with them have also canceled their contracts with other late-night news programs which have devoted more time to weather and local news. Then these above two specific evidences will strengthen the argument.
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- IELTS 8 Test 3 Writing Task 1
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e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 2.0 out of 6
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 4 2
No. of Sentences: 8 15
No. of Words: 207 350
No. of Characters: 1065 1500
No. of Different Words: 88 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.793 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.145 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.411 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 72 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 56 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 41 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 24 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 25.875 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 12.869 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.375 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.506 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.688 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.289 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... less time to weather and local news The author should also give an evidence tha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 19.6327345309 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.9520958084 23% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 11.1786427146 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 13.6137724551 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 28.8173652695 45% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 55.5748502994 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 16.3942115768 55% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1069.0 2260.96107784 47% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 207.0 441.139720559 47% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16425120773 5.12650576532 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 4.56307096286 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37817603505 2.78398813304 85% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 204.123752495 43% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.420289855072 0.468620217663 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 328.5 705.55239521 47% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.96107784431 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.22255489022 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 19.7664670659 5% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 207.0 22.8473053892 906% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 57.8364921388 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1069.0 119.503703932 895% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 207.0 23.324526521 887% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 23.0 5.70786347227 403% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 5.15768463074 58% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.25449101796 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.20758483034 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 6.88822355289 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.372381619831 0.218282227539 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.372381619831 0.0743258471296 501% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0701772020484 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221693941472 0.128457276422 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.192990399396 0.0628817314937 307% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 106.4 14.3799401198 740% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -138.63 48.3550499002 -287% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.1628742515 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 84.0 12.197005988 689% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.13 12.5979740519 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 16.5 8.32208582834 198% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 98.500998004 35% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 51.0 12.3882235529 412% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 84.8 11.1389221557 761% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 85.0 11.9071856287 714% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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