"Over the past year, our late-night news program has devoted increasingly more time to covering national news and less time to covering weather and local news. During the same time period, most of the complaints we received from viewers were concerned with the station's coverage of weather and local news. In addition, several local businesses that used to run advertisements during our late-night news program have just cancelled their advertising contracts with us. Therefore, in order to attract more viewers to our news programs and to avoid losing any further advertising revenues, we should expand the coverage of weather and local news on all our news programs."
The memorandum of the business manager of WLSS television station concluded that the news channel should increase the time of the coverage of weather and local news on all news programs. This was concluded on the basis of that the some of the reports showed that in the past year when they increased the time of coverage of national news their viewers were reduced and so beacause of it there income from advertisements was reduced. There are many of the questions that need to be answered in this conclusion made by the manager.
Firstly, the manager stated that when during the past year they increased the time of the coverage of national news, the most of the complaints were regarding it. But the manager haven't stated any authentic data about how much complaints were made. If the complaints were in less number then implying to increase time for local news and weather news may prove to be loss. As there are no such data available with the news channel regarding how much people like to watch local news and weather news so it should first focus on it before implying any changes.
Secondly, it has been stated the local businesses that used to run advertisements on their late night programmes has cancelled theior contracts. But they haven't stated any reason for which the businesses broke the contract as there can be many other reasons. So as of they have no indications for what reason the businesses broke the contract, it should first focus on finding the reason. There may be like that the businesses may not be finding anymore profitable to them by advertising on this news channel because of which they may have cancelled the contract.
Thirdly they stated that because of the forecasting of more national news in late night programs their viewers has reduced. But there may be possibilties that the viewers may now be finding boring to watch any kind of news ot they may not having any more interest in viewing this news channel. Also there are many more reasons for the reduction in the number of viewers which must be taken into account before implying any changes.
In conclusion before applying any changes to the scheduling existing of programs it should first find the reasons for which the number of viewers had been reduced and also the reason for which businesses broke the contract. So because of this the news channel will get the data that whether the implimentation of changes will be profitable or not.
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Suggestion: Also,
... interest in viewing this news channel. Also there are many more reasons for the red...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.6327345309 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.9520958084 124% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 11.1786427146 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 13.6137724551 125% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 28.8173652695 115% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 55.5748502994 108% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 16.3942115768 18% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2018.0 2260.96107784 89% => OK
No of words: 422.0 441.139720559 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78199052133 5.12650576532 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53239876712 4.56307096286 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47848721133 2.78398813304 89% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 204.123752495 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.379146919431 0.468620217663 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 623.7 705.55239521 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.471057884232 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.67365269461 179% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 19.7664670659 81% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.8473053892 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7250932562 57.8364921388 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.125 119.503703932 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.375 23.324526521 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0625 5.70786347227 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.25449101796 190% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.20758483034 85% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 6.88822355289 102% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290668651235 0.218282227539 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120156301237 0.0743258471296 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116505407781 0.0701772020484 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184617518963 0.128457276422 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12761599364 0.0628817314937 203% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 14.3799401198 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 48.3550499002 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.197005988 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 12.5979740519 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.32208582834 88% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 98.500998004 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 12.3882235529 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.1389221557 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.9071856287 118% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.