"Over the past year, our late-night news program has devoted increasingly more time to covering national news and less time to covering weather and local news. During the same time period, most of the complaints we received from viewers were concerned with the station's coverage of weather and local news. In addition, several local businesses that used to run advertisements during our late-night news program have just cancelled their advertising contracts with us. Therefore, in order to attract more viewers to our news programs and to avoid losing any further advertising revenues, we should expand the coverage of weather and local news on all our news programs."
The argument that restoring the time devoted to weather and local news will attract more viewers and prevent losing advertising revenues might sound warranted at first glance but it seriouly lacks proper evidences to substantiate tthe argument.
Firstly the argument fails to explain what type of complaints were received. Though it is mentioned that complaints received were concerned with station's coverage of weather and local news, it fails to elucidate the specific concern, whether the timing, or the reporter or the duration was the issue.
In addition, the argument assumes that the advertisers cancels the contracts of their advertisement of local business because of the lack of local news and weather reports. Well, the evidence of exact reason of cancelling the contract is not known. It could be because of the increased tariff for advertisements or the staff behaviour with the concerned businessmen. It is also possible that the have found a better station which offers at a better tariff. It could also be likely that the duration of advertisement slot was not adequate which pushed the businessmen to move to a different television station.
The argument also assumes that restoring time which was originally devoted to local news and weather reports will attract more viewers and also avoid further loss of advertising revenues. This assumptions largely lacks any evidence for substantiation because viewers choose to watch a television channel based on various factors of which type of programs, timing and the usefulness of the programs and also the content of the program weighs the more. The ultimate point to be considered is, it is not one factor whic increases the viewers of ant television channel. The argument omits the fact that it is not likely that losing of advertising revenues depends on whether the time allotment for local news and weather reports resumes or not.
In conclusion the argument needs necessary evidence of the intial reason of reduction of time to weather and local news, the reasons of local businessmen cancelling the advertisement contracts. A public poll could help in providing necessary evidence for proper time segregation and whether to restore the time devoted to local news and weather.
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Comments
Essay evaluation report
Sentence: The argument that restoring the time devoted to weather and local news will attract more viewers and prevent losing advertising revenues might sound warranted at first glance but it seriouly lacks proper evidences to substantiate tthe argument.
Error: tthe Suggestion: the
Error: seriouly Suggestion: seriously
Sentence: The ultimate point to be considered is, it is not one factor whic increases the viewers of ant television channel.
Error: whic Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: In conclusion the argument needs necessary evidence of the intial reason of reduction of time to weather and local news, the reasons of local businessmen cancelling the advertisement contracts.
Error: intial Suggestion: No alternate word
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argument 1 -- OK
argument 2 -- OK
argument 3 -- OK
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 4.5 out of 6
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 4 2
No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 360 350
No. of Characters: 1862 1500
No. of Different Words: 154 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.356 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.172 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.75 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 145 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 122 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 76 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 46 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 25.714 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.697 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.643 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.38 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.622 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.102 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 71, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e time devoted to weather and local news will attract more viewers and prevent lo...
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Line 4, column 457, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...tation which offers at a better tariff. It could also be likely that the duration ...
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Line 5, column 188, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: These
...d further loss of advertising revenues. This assumptions largely lacks any evidence ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, well, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.6327345309 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.9520958084 46% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 11.1786427146 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 13.6137724551 88% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 28.8173652695 62% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 55.5748502994 76% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 16.3942115768 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1895.0 2260.96107784 84% => OK
No of words: 360.0 441.139720559 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26388888889 5.12650576532 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.56307096286 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78181789527 2.78398813304 100% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 204.123752495 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.461111111111 0.468620217663 98% => OK
syllable_count: 591.3 705.55239521 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.96107784431 121% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.76447105788 91% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 19.7664670659 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.8473053892 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.1581675174 57.8364921388 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.357142857 119.503703932 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7142857143 23.324526521 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78571428571 5.70786347227 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 5.15768463074 136% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.25449101796 57% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.20758483034 73% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 6.88822355289 102% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277808040483 0.218282227539 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105747405796 0.0743258471296 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.079789265897 0.0701772020484 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173997300797 0.128457276422 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0987482588013 0.0628817314937 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 14.3799401198 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.3550499002 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.197005988 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.5979740519 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.32208582834 105% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 98.500998004 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 12.3882235529 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.1389221557 108% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.9071856287 118% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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