So as rightly posited by author in the argument that Pirouettes Ballet school is one of best dance schools in the town Eltown. there are lot of good things pushed for this school in comparison with other dance schools in town. By initial dichotomy of the argument we have lot of thought and surmise which needs to be discussed to come on agreeable conclusion.
"Pirouettes Ballet school as posited is best school available in the town for ballet dancing" - is the following has the any support in the context, Yes !! author has rightly engaged into various supporting clauses that they have intense dance program, dance teachers are highly trained and have performed in prestigious Ballet dance shows, but taking all of the assumption as food for thought can be enable to get into end conclusion. There are lot of loopholes and shortcomings to the paraphrase stated. It has been clearly posited that it is one best choice as dance school in the town, but there are lot of aspects and things on which person has to decide if the dance is truly aspect driven or based on all of the fallacies. Arguments mentioned in the topic indulge in heavy melodramatic way of alluring the students to join the school, there are lot of different to to take up as factors to think before opting as choice. How conventional there way of teaching is ? How friendly the teachers are to the students ? How much truth lies in data posited ? - this are few of the concerns which every students will have to think before assessing the school to opt for.
As rightly mentioned before context pretends to be best choice for every students. But no due stress has been given on were the dance teachers where hired after performed in prestigious ballet companies or they were trained in school. Things which would add to factors of deciding that student should opt the organisation or not, entirely depends upon various basic things that training program comprised of what all learning, Does student have take extra classes or tuition besides the school syllabus. By assessing various meaningful aspects person should decide or conclude which school should student opt for.
There are lot of surmise or tract points mentioned in to argument but none tempts to get into conclusion that person should opt for this school or not. Data projected from the Pirouettes Ballet School is has lot of confound things, which enables to person to things parochial picture of the school as in a big picture. But if necessary relevant data such as how efficient the school program is, how the alumni of schools had gave feedback of the school and some basic comprehensive data would lead us to get perfect conclusion of the argument.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So as” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
So as rightly posited by author in the argume...
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Line 1, column 128, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
... best dance schools in the town Eltown. there are lot of good things pushed for this ...
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Line 3, column 43, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the best'.
Suggestion: is the best
...pos;Pirouettes Ballet school as posited is best school available in the town for ballet...
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Line 3, column 167, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Author
... the any support in the context, Yes !! author has rightly engaged into various suppor...
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Line 3, column 363, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...stigious Ballet dance shows, but taking all of the assumption as food for thought can be e...
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Line 3, column 719, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...ance is truly aspect driven or based on all of the fallacies. Arguments mentioned in the t...
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Line 3, column 880, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: to
... the school, there are lot of different to to take up as factors to think before opti...
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Line 3, column 1031, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ndly the teachers are to the students ? How much truth lies in data posited ? - th...
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Line 3, column 1070, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... How much truth lies in data posited ? - this are few of the concerns which every...
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Line 5, column 49, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'be the best'.
Suggestion: be the best
...ly mentioned before context pretends to be best choice for every students. But no due s...
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Line 5, column 446, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'taken'.
Suggestion: taken
...of what all learning, Does student have take extra classes or tuition besides the sc...
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Line 5, column 537, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'aspects'' or 'aspect's'?
Suggestion: aspects'; aspect's
...llabus. By assessing various meaningful aspects person should decide or conclude which ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, so, as to, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.6327345309 117% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.9520958084 62% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 11.1786427146 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 13.6137724551 95% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 28.8173652695 52% => OK
Preposition: 73.0 55.5748502994 131% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 16.3942115768 43% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2242.0 2260.96107784 99% => OK
No of words: 461.0 441.139720559 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86334056399 5.12650576532 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63367139033 4.56307096286 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56704191694 2.78398813304 92% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 204.123752495 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.444685466377 0.468620217663 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 675.0 705.55239521 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.96107784431 20% => OK
Interrogative: 4.0 0.471057884232 849% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 0.0 8.76447105788 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.67365269461 239% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 19.7664670659 91% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.8473053892 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 96.2963532763 57.8364921388 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.555555556 119.503703932 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6111111111 23.324526521 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.70786347227 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.25449101796 228% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.20758483034 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.88822355289 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.67664670659 107% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356592692651 0.218282227539 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109414295057 0.0743258471296 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0913982499283 0.0701772020484 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236129723716 0.128457276422 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0744163902377 0.0628817314937 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 14.3799401198 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 48.3550499002 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.197005988 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.5979740519 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.32208582834 96% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 98.500998004 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 12.3882235529 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.1389221557 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.