Pirouettes Ballet School is the clear choice for any child. Of all the dance schools in Elmtown, Pirouettes has the most intensive program, and our teachers have danced in the most prestigious ballet companies all over the world. Many of our students have gone on to become professional dancers with top dance companies.
The argument states that the Pirouettes Ballet School in Elmtown is the best choice for the children eager to learn ballet. On being replete with myriad loopholes weaken the argument.
The very first fallacy is the statement that mentioned that the School has an intense program, failing to mention the evaluating factor of the intensity of the program. For example it might the number times the exhort their students to practice which though helps in perfecting their steps will not bring in soul for their dance. A good dancer should be lively in their dance rather than just performing a drill.
Moreover, it can be cited that the School is an obvious choice for a child and that the teacher has danced in the most prestigious ballet companies. Forgetting to mention the characteristics of a student the author has managed to earn the suspicion of his/her readers. The intense program can help some students to excel in their dance career, whereas some students need a different style of teaching on the whole.
Additionally, the author was able to show the evidence for the teacher to be a greater which in no way helps the readers to believe that the teacher has good teaching skills. For instance the teacher might be a great performer but when it comes to teaching, he/she need the teaching ability to make understand the dumbest student to learn the steps.
Also, he/she makes an assumption that by taking up the intense program will make the students dance professionals. Anybody can take up the dance program but to become a dance professional the students needs to be an in born dancer. The students mentioned to already had become the dance professional might be a dancer by birth.
In sum, the author made many unwarranted assumptions, failing to corroborate his argument with evidences casts doubt on his writings.
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- Pirouettes Ballet School is the clear choice for any child. Of all the dance schools in Elmtown, Pirouettes has the most intensive program, and our teachers have danced in the most prestigious ballet companies all over the world. Many of our students have 50
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'whereas', 'for example', 'for instance', 'on the whole']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.262048192771 0.25644967241 102% => OK
Verbs: 0.177710843373 0.15541462614 114% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0632530120482 0.0836205057962 76% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0301204819277 0.0520304965353 58% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0301204819277 0.0272364105082 111% => OK
Prepositions: 0.10843373494 0.125424944231 86% => OK
Participles: 0.0451807228916 0.0416121511921 109% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.62728816085 2.79052419416 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0481927710843 0.026700313972 180% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.00602409638554 0.001811407834 333% => OK
Determiners: 0.159638554217 0.113004496875 141% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0271084337349 0.0255425247493 106% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0120481927711 0.0127820249294 94% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1874.0 2731.13054187 69% => OK
No of words: 310.0 446.07635468 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.04516129032 6.12365571057 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.57801047555 92% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.374193548387 0.378187486979 99% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.267741935484 0.287650121315 93% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.154838709677 0.208842608468 74% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0967741935484 0.135150697306 72% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62728816085 2.79052419416 94% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 207.018472906 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503225806452 0.469332199767 107% => OK
Word variations: 50.7354354558 52.1807786196 97% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 20.039408867 70% => OK
Sentence length: 22.1428571429 23.2022227129 95% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.8155259595 57.7814097925 59% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.857142857 141.986410481 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1428571429 23.2022227129 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.714285714286 0.724660767414 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.14285714286 117% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 3.58251231527 223% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 48.9170506912 51.9672348444 94% => OK
Elegance: 1.74683544304 1.8405768891 95% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.491554714879 0.441005458295 111% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.157076099426 0.135418324435 116% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.108842916912 0.0829849096947 131% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.707227176548 0.58762219726 120% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.160969668705 0.147661913831 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.240090330684 0.193483328276 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117673490542 0.0970749176394 121% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.402321249697 0.42659136922 94% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.163277952289 0.0774707102158 211% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.322175497406 0.312017818177 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120549241603 0.0698173142475 173% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.33743842365 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.87684729064 58% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.82512315271 62% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 6.46551724138 93% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 5.36822660099 37% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.82389162562 71% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 14.657635468 68% => OK
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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