The prsent claim of the personnal director of Acme publishing company.
The present claim of the personal director of Acme publishing company is invalid or unjustified. he didn't give the convincing evidence that support his claim.
firstly, the course Easy read speed takes much time to compete the syllabus, instead of focusing in the company work, this course makes the employee to focus more on reading courses than that of paperwork of company, which reduces the work of the company.
Secondly, as mentioned the course fees is $500, which is huge for the small growing publication and it's very difficult to manage for small publication as well as the companies that are running with the large employee, more employee more will be the cost for the course.
Lastly, this fees includes the three-week seminar for course in ta Spruce city, place might be not accessible for all the employee of the publication. The three weeks is long duration, the company might running through the less people because some of the employee might get busy during this course and the productivity of the publication will be decrease.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 98, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
...hing company is invalid or unjustified. he didnt give the convincing evidence that...
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Line 1, column 101, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...g company is invalid or unjustified. he didnt give the convincing evidence that suppo...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Firstly
...cing evidence that support his claim. firstly, the course Easy read speed takes much ...
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Line 4, column 224, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun people is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
..., the company might running through the less people because some of the employee mig...
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Line 4, column 244, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...running through the less people because some of the employee might get busy during this cou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.6327345309 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.9520958084 39% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 11.1786427146 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 13.6137724551 37% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 28.8173652695 31% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 55.5748502994 32% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 16.3942115768 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 872.0 2260.96107784 39% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 175.0 441.139720559 40% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98285714286 5.12650576532 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 4.56307096286 80% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53693692858 2.78398813304 91% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 204.123752495 51% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.468620217663 128% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 705.55239521 37% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.76447105788 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 19.7664670659 30% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.8473053892 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.9402726506 57.8364921388 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.333333333 119.503703932 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1666666667 23.324526521 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 5.70786347227 193% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.25449101796 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.20758483034 37% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 6.88822355289 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.67664670659 64% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106451041087 0.218282227539 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0792062917357 0.0743258471296 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120835712419 0.0701772020484 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0870952479915 0.128457276422 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117821888708 0.0628817314937 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 14.3799401198 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 48.3550499002 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.197005988 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.2 12.5979740519 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.32208582834 102% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 98.500998004 39% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 12.3882235529 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 11.1389221557 122% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.9071856287 118% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.